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8/11/2014 c1 11Upon the Wings of Angels
Wow. I really liked it! It was sweet and kinda creepy at the same time. _

One thing, though: You used it's incorrectly at least twice. Remember that it's should be used only for it is, not for posessive. 'I put the knife back in it's sheath' is wrong. 'I put the knife back in its sheath' is right. Also, you might want to change your formatting so that each line is seperate (if that doesn't make sense, PM your gmail username to me, I'll show you).

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