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8/27/2014 c2 8co-creating metamorphosis
Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading your work and look forward to updates.

There are some really beautiful lines in these first two chapters. Some of my favourites - "in a hotel room you've checked in with someone else's name", "laughing like a child that drops midway at the shorelines", "she bound the branches with a red ribbon and called it hers", "a miscarriage of days", "pyre"

I am very intrigued by the female character you are describing. I hope to learn more about her. I enjoy the ways you are describing her - lots of showing, not so much telling. It's really lovely.

Infinite love.
CM

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