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4/7/2015 c1 4markmark261
Thought it was a great little story, made me smile. My girlfriend has a similar menagerie (two dogs, four cats), including a cat with a mean swat, so it seemed all too believable (especially the toy being the meaning of life, though my girlfriend's other dog would opt for cheese).

On the nitpicky side, there were a few things that distracted me. I assume you meant "mutant turtle" rather than "mutant tennis". Also, to be extremely nitpicky, your direct speech sometimes has incorrect grammar, where you use periods at the end of the direct speech when you should be using commas in some situations, if the sentence continues after the quotation marks (sorry to point it out, but I used to do the exact same thing and wish someone had pointed it out to me). Anyway, this is minor stuff, a small speed bump in my reading, really like the story and hope the five convene again to discuss other philosophical questions.
8/7/2014 c1 13Giang Tien
Beautiful crack!fic. XD

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