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2/21 c2 emmanoah1969
Your story is amazing, and your characters truly well-written. I'm really excited to transform your idea into a comic! Let's get in touch my contact information is below.
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12/30/2018 c2 LunaRed
This is an extremely interesting and engaging story. The plot seems great, and the industry information gaps can be filled as it goes on. I would really love it if you continued this, to see where it goes and how it ends
12/8/2015 c2 ColaGummyBears
Wow! Great story and plot! Really interesting.
Their conversation is funny, especially the "transgression of your virtue" and Faye explaining different expressions. It's awesome in a way that we could see how the people in medieval age react how we do things now. I liked Princess Pea's name hahahahah! Brilliant! Faye is also very observant.
Ohhhhh! A mysterious object has appeared! I wonder what it is? I do hope you update soon! :)
8/30/2014 c2 dramalover21
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Looking forward to seeing what happens next, especially since she found the book which I remember being mentioned in the one-shot! Also, I am curious to see if she somehow knows the villain already since she vaguely thinks he sounds familiar in some way?

Only critique is her reaction to the "No Service." I thought she jumped a little too fast into numb/freak out mode; I mean, it seems more likely with how logical she's been that she would just wave it off as a technical error of some sort; she just seemed to believe, "Omg, she's actually a princess" a little too quickly.
8/20/2014 c1 1treadingfire
love this! I really hope you continue it :D
8/8/2014 c1 2the.lost.scribe
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

I'm so happy you decided to make it a full blown story instead of just a , really, really excited to read the rest. I'm especially waiting for /him/ to appear and the story to progress. Please update sooooooon! :)))
8/7/2014 c1 dramalover21
Loved this first chapter! The chat was quite humorous. I loved this story as a one-shot, so I can't wait to see it in its full development! Hope you decide to continue it!

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