
2/21 c2 emmanoah1969
Your story is amazing, and your characters truly well-written. I'm really excited to transform your idea into a comic! Let's get in touch my contact information is below.
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Your story is amazing, and your characters truly well-written. I'm really excited to transform your idea into a comic! Let's get in touch my contact information is below.
Contact Details:
Email: emmanoah1969 at gmail dot com
Emmanoah333 on Discord
12/30/2018 c2 LunaRed
This is an extremely interesting and engaging story. The plot seems great, and the industry information gaps can be filled as it goes on. I would really love it if you continued this, to see where it goes and how it ends
This is an extremely interesting and engaging story. The plot seems great, and the industry information gaps can be filled as it goes on. I would really love it if you continued this, to see where it goes and how it ends
12/8/2015 c2 ColaGummyBears
Wow! Great story and plot! Really interesting.
Their conversation is funny, especially the "transgression of your virtue" and Faye explaining different expressions. It's awesome in a way that we could see how the people in medieval age react how we do things now. I liked Princess Pea's name hahahahah! Brilliant! Faye is also very observant.
Ohhhhh! A mysterious object has appeared! I wonder what it is? I do hope you update soon! :)
Wow! Great story and plot! Really interesting.
Their conversation is funny, especially the "transgression of your virtue" and Faye explaining different expressions. It's awesome in a way that we could see how the people in medieval age react how we do things now. I liked Princess Pea's name hahahahah! Brilliant! Faye is also very observant.
Ohhhhh! A mysterious object has appeared! I wonder what it is? I do hope you update soon! :)
8/30/2014 c2 dramalover21
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Looking forward to seeing what happens next, especially since she found the book which I remember being mentioned in the one-shot! Also, I am curious to see if she somehow knows the villain already since she vaguely thinks he sounds familiar in some way?
Only critique is her reaction to the "No Service." I thought she jumped a little too fast into numb/freak out mode; I mean, it seems more likely with how logical she's been that she would just wave it off as a technical error of some sort; she just seemed to believe, "Omg, she's actually a princess" a little too quickly.
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Looking forward to seeing what happens next, especially since she found the book which I remember being mentioned in the one-shot! Also, I am curious to see if she somehow knows the villain already since she vaguely thinks he sounds familiar in some way?
Only critique is her reaction to the "No Service." I thought she jumped a little too fast into numb/freak out mode; I mean, it seems more likely with how logical she's been that she would just wave it off as a technical error of some sort; she just seemed to believe, "Omg, she's actually a princess" a little too quickly.
8/8/2014 c1
2the.lost.scribe
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
I'm so happy you decided to make it a full blown story instead of just a , really, really excited to read the rest. I'm especially waiting for /him/ to appear and the story to progress. Please update sooooooon! :)))

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
I'm so happy you decided to make it a full blown story instead of just a , really, really excited to read the rest. I'm especially waiting for /him/ to appear and the story to progress. Please update sooooooon! :)))
8/7/2014 c1 dramalover21
Loved this first chapter! The chat was quite humorous. I loved this story as a one-shot, so I can't wait to see it in its full development! Hope you decide to continue it!
Loved this first chapter! The chat was quite humorous. I loved this story as a one-shot, so I can't wait to see it in its full development! Hope you decide to continue it!