for Darker Than Black (Hybrid Descent 1)12/24/2021 c1 avalavaa
I love with the story and you have great writing skill. Do you mind if I offer you a writing contest? You should check it first and get the prize. So here is the link:
bit. ly/ 2Yr0vLC
p.s: you should delete the space for the link first
I love with the story and you have great writing skill. Do you mind if I offer you a writing contest? You should check it first and get the prize. So here is the link:
bit. ly/ 2Yr0vLC
p.s: you should delete the space for the link first
6/17/2018 c8 Nble2
I honestly don’t know how you don’t have more reviews. Lmfao I realised the last review you received was from me last year and surprise I’m back for second read! Seriously this is just so beautifully written and there are so many hidden stereotypes addressed. Even though I’ve read it before, I feel exactly the same way I did the first time around. I’ve read good stories on here but very few touch you like this does. Sending lots of love xo
I honestly don’t know how you don’t have more reviews. Lmfao I realised the last review you received was from me last year and surprise I’m back for second read! Seriously this is just so beautifully written and there are so many hidden stereotypes addressed. Even though I’ve read it before, I feel exactly the same way I did the first time around. I’ve read good stories on here but very few touch you like this does. Sending lots of love xo
12/18/2017 c28 Nble2
HOLY CRAP HOW HAVE I ONLY JUST READ THIS! Honestly I read a lot of stories on here but there are only a handful that I absolutely adore and this is definitely one of those. My god you had me bawling like a baby, like seriously I would burst into tears and have to hide in my room so no one can see. Everything about this was just so beautifully written. The romance, the struggles, the politics, the gore. Especially Dowan! Her character is absolutely amazing and every time she does or says something bad ass I can’t help but squeal and literally scream girl power. And omg Daem? If only men like that existed, maybe I’ll be lucky enough to snag myself someone like that? Haha anyway I am exhausted from this emotional rollercoaster but I can’t wait to read the sequels. Please know that I, and probably along with many others, appreciate your imagination and beautiful writing because this really touched me and as stupid as it sounds, gave me some sense of hope. Agh I absolutely adore the shit out of you and your characters.
Hope all is well babe! Xoxo
Looking forward to reading more xx
HOLY CRAP HOW HAVE I ONLY JUST READ THIS! Honestly I read a lot of stories on here but there are only a handful that I absolutely adore and this is definitely one of those. My god you had me bawling like a baby, like seriously I would burst into tears and have to hide in my room so no one can see. Everything about this was just so beautifully written. The romance, the struggles, the politics, the gore. Especially Dowan! Her character is absolutely amazing and every time she does or says something bad ass I can’t help but squeal and literally scream girl power. And omg Daem? If only men like that existed, maybe I’ll be lucky enough to snag myself someone like that? Haha anyway I am exhausted from this emotional rollercoaster but I can’t wait to read the sequels. Please know that I, and probably along with many others, appreciate your imagination and beautiful writing because this really touched me and as stupid as it sounds, gave me some sense of hope. Agh I absolutely adore the shit out of you and your characters.
Hope all is well babe! Xoxo
Looking forward to reading more xx
12/26/2016 c28 SailorPikaAngel
Wow! What an amazing world you have created. I am blown away by how absolutely inspiring dowan and daem 's love story is. I love how feisty dowan is and no matter how many obstacles came, she fought through it all believing in their love and never giving up. It is absolutely refreshing and amazing that you have created such a strong female character who never backed down from anything. I also loved the club scene about when she tried to commit suicide and you had a bit of an interaction between a wolf and a vampire. The vampire introduced himself. Dowan and Daem's love opened a path no one was willing to go through and their blood and struggles opened up a possible pathway for tentative relations and acceptance. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and looking forward to more from their world.
Wow! What an amazing world you have created. I am blown away by how absolutely inspiring dowan and daem 's love story is. I love how feisty dowan is and no matter how many obstacles came, she fought through it all believing in their love and never giving up. It is absolutely refreshing and amazing that you have created such a strong female character who never backed down from anything. I also loved the club scene about when she tried to commit suicide and you had a bit of an interaction between a wolf and a vampire. The vampire introduced himself. Dowan and Daem's love opened a path no one was willing to go through and their blood and struggles opened up a possible pathway for tentative relations and acceptance. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and looking forward to more from their world.
11/22/2014 c28 Anon
Just wanted to tell you that I love your story!
Just wanted to tell you that I love your story!
10/26/2014 c28 Annabelle Nicole Campbell
Tears...sobs... Where did I put my box of tissues... Sniff, sniff...
Oh my goodness that was so sweet and heartwarming, I truly cried with this chapter. Maybe its because I'm a sap or maybe it was the happy end but my tears are not shed lightly like a confused pregnant woman...another one of my puns, hehe. But seriously, this story was magnificent. BTW, what is a novella? I hear that word a lot. Is that a word for digital novel or is it a word for an achievement, like the Nobel prize.
I think it would be totally awesome to see the girl twin to grow and become the true mate of that alpha wolf from the council that escaped death, as it would straighten his buttuski out. And there is coupling you could do with supporting characters, and I would love to see the lion of a life the baby boy lives...I bet he is a firecracker. There is so much you can do for a sequel if you haven't already...because IDK what you are doing with your second/third books you mentioned in this last chapter's notes, so my thought are only suggestions if you need them.
Lastly, know that this story was well done. I give you applause with standing ovation...literally, you should have seen me, I was standing up flapping my hands together like an ecstatic seal, and I was hallering woo since I can't whistle. Thank you for the pleasure of being swept away by this beautiful story of yours.
Tears...sobs... Where did I put my box of tissues... Sniff, sniff...
Oh my goodness that was so sweet and heartwarming, I truly cried with this chapter. Maybe its because I'm a sap or maybe it was the happy end but my tears are not shed lightly like a confused pregnant woman...another one of my puns, hehe. But seriously, this story was magnificent. BTW, what is a novella? I hear that word a lot. Is that a word for digital novel or is it a word for an achievement, like the Nobel prize.
I think it would be totally awesome to see the girl twin to grow and become the true mate of that alpha wolf from the council that escaped death, as it would straighten his buttuski out. And there is coupling you could do with supporting characters, and I would love to see the lion of a life the baby boy lives...I bet he is a firecracker. There is so much you can do for a sequel if you haven't already...because IDK what you are doing with your second/third books you mentioned in this last chapter's notes, so my thought are only suggestions if you need them.
Lastly, know that this story was well done. I give you applause with standing ovation...literally, you should have seen me, I was standing up flapping my hands together like an ecstatic seal, and I was hallering woo since I can't whistle. Thank you for the pleasure of being swept away by this beautiful story of yours.
10/26/2014 c27 Annabelle Nicole Campbell
This chapter, like all those written for the sake of fights, was bloody gorgous... Pun intended :-)
This chapter, like all those written for the sake of fights, was bloody gorgous... Pun intended :-)
10/24/2014 c28 Blackrain7557
Honestly this was the best piece of work I've read in a long time. Excellent pacing and characters, even with the ridiculous amounts of lovey eyes Daem and Dowan give each other. Honestly there isn't much else to say, I'm excited to see the next parts of this particular story and more of the characters. Keep up the good work.
Rain
Honestly this was the best piece of work I've read in a long time. Excellent pacing and characters, even with the ridiculous amounts of lovey eyes Daem and Dowan give each other. Honestly there isn't much else to say, I'm excited to see the next parts of this particular story and more of the characters. Keep up the good work.
Rain
10/22/2014 c26 Annabelle Nicole Campbell
I probably say this too often but I love this story. I am relieved to see Felix dead. So much to say but can't figure how to put in words so a ty will have to do for this chapter. Ty for a wedding that took more than one long chapter. Ty for doing such a good job showing love between two people is more than sex. Ty for giving the characters a well diserved slice of revenge and an abundancy of happy peace. However, life and art mimic each other and life has taught me that the better things are, the harder they will be; that is life's way of saying sorry before it rips away a little bit of your soul. Knowing this, I can't help but get nervous with the large amount of happiness in the past few chapters. Lets tear this bandaid off quickly before I loose my nerve. :-) :-) :-)
I probably say this too often but I love this story. I am relieved to see Felix dead. So much to say but can't figure how to put in words so a ty will have to do for this chapter. Ty for a wedding that took more than one long chapter. Ty for doing such a good job showing love between two people is more than sex. Ty for giving the characters a well diserved slice of revenge and an abundancy of happy peace. However, life and art mimic each other and life has taught me that the better things are, the harder they will be; that is life's way of saying sorry before it rips away a little bit of your soul. Knowing this, I can't help but get nervous with the large amount of happiness in the past few chapters. Lets tear this bandaid off quickly before I loose my nerve. :-) :-) :-)
10/20/2014 c25 Andrea
Gahhh, it was wonderful! I loved the whole chapter :,) especially when she told him abput the baby (I have a soft spot for things like that ) can't wait to read what happens next!
Gahhh, it was wonderful! I loved the whole chapter :,) especially when she told him abput the baby (I have a soft spot for things like that ) can't wait to read what happens next!
10/19/2014 c25 Annabelle Nicole Campbell
This chapter was so beautiful. I loved her dress, their vowels, and most of all-his reaction to her announcement. Well done as always!
This chapter was so beautiful. I loved her dress, their vowels, and most of all-his reaction to her announcement. Well done as always!
10/15/2014 c24 Annabelle Nicole Campbell
I liked this chapter, its a glance into the short future... And... I'm glad she is finally prgos. I look forward to your next update.
I liked this chapter, its a glance into the short future... And... I'm glad she is finally prgos. I look forward to your next update.
10/12/2014 c23 Blackrain7557
Well that was intense, lots of emotion going on there and it had me going "wow" a few times. I felt bad for her wolf, that's gotta be a mess to deal with, though I like the fact that sh'e basically petting him now, interesting dynamic between them. Zelios is also probably my favorite character even though he's show up twice total in the story. No particular reason I just think the idea of his character is interesting.
Very well done with the writing, I'll be looking forward to seeing how this all turns out.
Blackrain
Well that was intense, lots of emotion going on there and it had me going "wow" a few times. I felt bad for her wolf, that's gotta be a mess to deal with, though I like the fact that sh'e basically petting him now, interesting dynamic between them. Zelios is also probably my favorite character even though he's show up twice total in the story. No particular reason I just think the idea of his character is interesting.
Very well done with the writing, I'll be looking forward to seeing how this all turns out.
Blackrain
10/11/2014 c23 Annabelle Nicole Campbell
Damnation, you write like honey dripping off the devil's tongue...This chapter was exquisitly descriptive in Dowan's POV. I am glad she came back to her loved ones in one semi-piece. Do thy go after the Fae and those council? How do they move forward if more ppl have come to hate them BC of her hybrid-ality? Your story is so good that I hope a director finds it and turns it into a movie... I'd pay to see that! I'm going to have to take writing lessons from u. :-)
Damnation, you write like honey dripping off the devil's tongue...This chapter was exquisitly descriptive in Dowan's POV. I am glad she came back to her loved ones in one semi-piece. Do thy go after the Fae and those council? How do they move forward if more ppl have come to hate them BC of her hybrid-ality? Your story is so good that I hope a director finds it and turns it into a movie... I'd pay to see that! I'm going to have to take writing lessons from u. :-)
10/8/2014 c22 Annabelle Nicole Campbell
6 hrs later and my marathon comes to a hault..this time I can't blame my eyes...lol. your story took me to places I never imagined happening. The layers of your story fit like a puzzle expertly crafted. I can't wait to read more. I am interested to see if Dowan and Daem get those nasty fae and if the council is ever corrected for its own prejudicial injustice... I smell a rebellion or a mega war befitting Deam's soldier years. OK, now to catch some sleep before the adjacent school let's out the crowd of screaming kiddies. Ty for your story...I look forward to more of your work... Night for now (sleepy smile).
6 hrs later and my marathon comes to a hault..this time I can't blame my eyes...lol. your story took me to places I never imagined happening. The layers of your story fit like a puzzle expertly crafted. I can't wait to read more. I am interested to see if Dowan and Daem get those nasty fae and if the council is ever corrected for its own prejudicial injustice... I smell a rebellion or a mega war befitting Deam's soldier years. OK, now to catch some sleep before the adjacent school let's out the crowd of screaming kiddies. Ty for your story...I look forward to more of your work... Night for now (sleepy smile).