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8/10/2014 c2 4Adrienne B
Interesting and really exciting. :)
I love the way this story's been written and not to mention all the spying haha. I can just imagine how vast that info given to her was. seriously more than 200gigs of spread sheets. I wouldn't want to be Betty and go through all that.
Again it needs a little proof reading but otherwise, awesome. :)
8/10/2014 c1 Adrienne B
I love your idea for this story. It's making me really curious. My mind actually went to 'what if' mode while I was reading.
There were a few things that needed editing, just to polish, but nothing really big.
Although I got a little confused cause I thought the bonds really can evolve like with the UN ambassador?
8/9/2014 c2 Phalkor
This story is.. exciting. Can't wait for more.

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