1/26/2015 c1 JaveHarron
Again, your writing talents have grown and allowed you to find a comfortable niche in a new genre. The particular conclusion to this was a fun one, and I'm sad I most likely won't get to read the other stories in this anthology.

8/13/2014 c1 9CaseyT
The detail really makes this stand out. Like your protagonist the reader is lulled into a false sense of normalcy.