for Returning the favour3/22/2016 c15 
52Liviania
I really enjoyed this story! I liked how even when things got complicated, there was a real simplicity to how Shyann and Bryn related to each other.
52LivianiaI really enjoyed this story! I liked how even when things got complicated, there was a real simplicity to how Shyann and Bryn related to each other.
12/28/2015 c15 Guest
Love it! Perfect ending!
Love it! Perfect ending!
11/17/2015 c15 Adiez
Bryn and Shyann, I love their name :)
Well, well, well, you are the first author that I read who gave a free relationship to is character and I just love it ! And the sex IS mindblowing ;) don't mind Bryn.
Honestly it was too short but that why it's great :) see you soon
Bryn and Shyann, I love their name :)
Well, well, well, you are the first author that I read who gave a free relationship to is character and I just love it ! And the sex IS mindblowing ;) don't mind Bryn.
Honestly it was too short but that why it's great :) see you soon
10/30/2015 c15 Pye
This is truly one of my favourite slash stories/ pairings. A lot of D/s stories carry over preferred bedroom roles to regular life, but you recognize that those are two distinct things. That's part of what makes Shyann & Bryn so very very hot. If you ever get a new story idea for these characters, some new conflict, I'd love to read more of them. Or get firsthand the scene where Shyann tells Ashford;). Maybe an extra?
This is truly one of my favourite slash stories/ pairings. A lot of D/s stories carry over preferred bedroom roles to regular life, but you recognize that those are two distinct things. That's part of what makes Shyann & Bryn so very very hot. If you ever get a new story idea for these characters, some new conflict, I'd love to read more of them. Or get firsthand the scene where Shyann tells Ashford;). Maybe an extra?
6/28/2015 c9 Dark Lynnette
This has been quite the read. Completely different from what I was expecting after the first two chapters. It's fun and at the same time has some heart to it. I'm very interested to see how the week goes and how the meeting with Chardon will go. That should be fun!
This has been quite the read. Completely different from what I was expecting after the first two chapters. It's fun and at the same time has some heart to it. I'm very interested to see how the week goes and how the meeting with Chardon will go. That should be fun!
3/7/2015 c11 MizuAz
You've really got that innate talent of a writer of literature - the lilting, easy, smoky prose that makes even an everyday scene something meaningful. The stocking/flashing pale schoolgirl skin image was very pretty, and knowing how it was affecting the observer turned it utterly erotic. Your descriptions are just gorgeous, like this: "...her voice curling through the air, soft as steam, inexorably seeping into everything..." And: "I'd messed up anyway, and the words fell from my lips, sinking into the carpet like a thousand lead ball bearings – which I would probably have to pick up individually." I reread those lines a few times - that kind of beauty in writing makes my chest tickle.
You've really got that innate talent of a writer of literature - the lilting, easy, smoky prose that makes even an everyday scene something meaningful. The stocking/flashing pale schoolgirl skin image was very pretty, and knowing how it was affecting the observer turned it utterly erotic. Your descriptions are just gorgeous, like this: "...her voice curling through the air, soft as steam, inexorably seeping into everything..." And: "I'd messed up anyway, and the words fell from my lips, sinking into the carpet like a thousand lead ball bearings – which I would probably have to pick up individually." I reread those lines a few times - that kind of beauty in writing makes my chest tickle.
2/13/2015 c14 mazotori
Omg tihs story is great! Its fun and sexy and the characters are great. You did a great job with it!
Omg tihs story is great! Its fun and sexy and the characters are great. You did a great job with it!
1/24/2015 c15 AnnabelleX2
Hate to see this story end. Glad they got to 'have the last say' in regards of Bryn's brother! :)
Hate to see this story end. Glad they got to 'have the last say' in regards of Bryn's brother! :)
1/23/2015 c15 samichuu
Yeah, being ace and reading/writing smut can be... Interesting... Sometimes. Still. I love this story. I love that it's pretty much gratuitous smut but still has a strong plot. The characters are strong and well rounded, and most importantly, the BDSM is portrayed realistically. I'm kinda disappointed that it's over ):
Yeah, being ace and reading/writing smut can be... Interesting... Sometimes. Still. I love this story. I love that it's pretty much gratuitous smut but still has a strong plot. The characters are strong and well rounded, and most importantly, the BDSM is portrayed realistically. I'm kinda disappointed that it's over ):
1/23/2015 c15 chibikodo
I am glad Bryn put Ashton in his place. Shyann was probably anticipating Ashton blowing up at him sometime. I really do wonder why Ash is such a douche.
I am glad Bryn put Ashton in his place. Shyann was probably anticipating Ashton blowing up at him sometime. I really do wonder why Ash is such a douche.