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102Kathryn Claire O'Connor
Very nice; I enjoyed reading it. You should continue it I think.:)
102Kathryn Claire O'ConnorVery nice; I enjoyed reading it. You should continue it I think.:)
8/18/2014 c1 9jan.ferreira
I liked it, and I am very curious as to what happens next. I like how you split the story for both perspectives. I say keep going, I would very much like to know what happens next.
9jan.ferreiraI liked it, and I am very curious as to what happens next. I like how you split the story for both perspectives. I say keep going, I would very much like to know what happens next.
8/18/2014 c1 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Not bad, has potential. :) I'd say continue on with it, because the sentence "Because he was looking at the scars on my wrists" doesn't seem like the conclusion, know what I mean? If you want to leave it as a one-shot, that's fine too, but I really suggest giving this story some closure before leaving it to rest. I really think this story could become something good if you're willing to give it a bit of time and thought. Hope to see more from you soon, and please excuse me if I don't leave a review for everything I read.
Not bad, has potential. :) I'd say continue on with it, because the sentence "Because he was looking at the scars on my wrists" doesn't seem like the conclusion, know what I mean? If you want to leave it as a one-shot, that's fine too, but I really suggest giving this story some closure before leaving it to rest. I really think this story could become something good if you're willing to give it a bit of time and thought. Hope to see more from you soon, and please excuse me if I don't leave a review for everything I read.