8/21/2014 c1 13Whisperedthing
I'll preface this by saying I have had the shortest attention span lately. I'll be reading a story and then suddenly just feel like...not reading anymore. I'll goof around on websites or work on my own stories and I rarely come back...

When it came to your story, I didn't stop once. It was just an amazing piece of work; it made me feel something, which is really a hit or miss on a site like this. It was realistic and likely at some point, a true story...and you put it into words beautifully.

I could see it all happening in my head and I'm running out of ways to say how much I loved it, how perfect this story was. It was just beautiful.