12/15/2014 c4 5RainyDay12
The person in this story (You, writer, or fictional figment of your imagination? I guess I'll never know.) sounds like they are angry at the world for not understanding and accepting them, which seems fair. But they need to realize that you are the only one who can save yourself and asking other (stupid, lazy, as you eloquently said) people for help won't work. Whoever put this aching piece of their soul on the Internet for all to see is very brave, whether you are writing about yourself or not, and I know you have the courage to save yourself. I will recommend the best medicine in the world-music. Listen to Hozier,his songs have lots of hidden power for those special enough to see-hear-it. Long story short, this is a beautiful piece of writing, and it touched my soul.
The person in this story (You, writer, or fictional figment of your imagination? I guess I'll never know.) sounds like they are angry at the world for not understanding and accepting them, which seems fair. But they need to realize that you are the only one who can save yourself and asking other (stupid, lazy, as you eloquently said) people for help won't work. Whoever put this aching piece of their soul on the Internet for all to see is very brave, whether you are writing about yourself or not, and I know you have the courage to save yourself. I will recommend the best medicine in the world-music. Listen to Hozier,his songs have lots of hidden power for those special enough to see-hear-it. Long story short, this is a beautiful piece of writing, and it touched my soul.
9/25/2014 c2 dalegoodine
I will be following your "letters to nobody." Hmm, very interesting because I have not yet determined whether or not you are being serious and reaching out to people through anonymity or this is some elaborate piece of fiction. Something tells me the latter.
Reminds me of a fiction book I read in juvenile detention about a girl who cuts herself and gets sent to a rehab facility with these others girls with various issues.
I will be following your "letters to nobody." Hmm, very interesting because I have not yet determined whether or not you are being serious and reaching out to people through anonymity or this is some elaborate piece of fiction. Something tells me the latter.
Reminds me of a fiction book I read in juvenile detention about a girl who cuts herself and gets sent to a rehab facility with these others girls with various issues.
9/6/2014 c3 4LiveAndHope
I took the time to read your chapters/instalments and then I took the time to read both your profile and the reviews for this story/whatever you want it to be. Not because I am a stalker, but because ,like the previous reviewers, I'm not sure whether you are writing from your own current experiences or whether you are in fact writing as a character in a story. Apologies if my assumptions were incorrect.
Like every other reader and reviewer, I'm going to tell you what I think.
Currently, I'm a student about to start my first year to work towards a degree in science (I'm both excited and anxious). I may be naive or whatever whatever but I'm a strong believer that life is what you make of it.
I feel like this story/piece is a personal experience so I'm going to address it in the same sense. In Chapter 3 (or the recent post) you said you had to pull over. So, you have a car. (Excellent deduction, Watson!) You can move somewhere else, it's a big scary world but you live in it! You can do it, gather your savings, maybe you aren't where you are supposed to be.
You see the faults and the bad things in the world, change it. Do whatever you feel is right and be the change that you want to see.
I don't want this to seem confrontational, but if this is real, I'm sorry this all happened to you. I know I shouldn't feel sorry for something I didn't do, but I am.
If this is a story, have some free motivational speech that you can acknowledge and then carry on as you were.
I'm here following and reading, regardless!
I took the time to read your chapters/instalments and then I took the time to read both your profile and the reviews for this story/whatever you want it to be. Not because I am a stalker, but because ,like the previous reviewers, I'm not sure whether you are writing from your own current experiences or whether you are in fact writing as a character in a story. Apologies if my assumptions were incorrect.
Like every other reader and reviewer, I'm going to tell you what I think.
Currently, I'm a student about to start my first year to work towards a degree in science (I'm both excited and anxious). I may be naive or whatever whatever but I'm a strong believer that life is what you make of it.
I feel like this story/piece is a personal experience so I'm going to address it in the same sense. In Chapter 3 (or the recent post) you said you had to pull over. So, you have a car. (Excellent deduction, Watson!) You can move somewhere else, it's a big scary world but you live in it! You can do it, gather your savings, maybe you aren't where you are supposed to be.
You see the faults and the bad things in the world, change it. Do whatever you feel is right and be the change that you want to see.
I don't want this to seem confrontational, but if this is real, I'm sorry this all happened to you. I know I shouldn't feel sorry for something I didn't do, but I am.
If this is a story, have some free motivational speech that you can acknowledge and then carry on as you were.
I'm here following and reading, regardless!
9/5/2014 c1 glacies
You don't need lots of degrees to be a writer.
This is a very interesting story/whatever you meant it to be.
You don't need lots of degrees to be a writer.
This is a very interesting story/whatever you meant it to be.
9/5/2014 c3 10Emil Boyd
Hi. If this is you...if this is really about your life...then I am sorry about your classes being horrible and you being alone and all. If not, you are a great writer that can totally draw people in. Good job!
Hi. If this is you...if this is really about your life...then I am sorry about your classes being horrible and you being alone and all. If not, you are a great writer that can totally draw people in. Good job!
8/28/2014 c1 Guest
Is this about you? Because I can't help feeling you're a very unlikable person just from reading this...I wouldn't want you to be my friend in real life, you know why?
1) You're self-centered - everything in this letter is about yourself. You don't ask anybody else any questions, it's always I this, I that. If you don't consider other people, why do you expect them to consider you?
2) You overgeneralize the population. Either everyone is this, or that. You think all people are horrid/mean, and call them a lot of nasty names in this letter which I won't care to quote. Not everyone is like that, and if you're ignorant enough to generalize the population into categories just because they see things differently to you, well...it's no wonder why you can't find friends.
3) You overgeneralize women. This is a minor point of number 2. And it just makes me tick, as a feminist inside. I may not be a feminist by the technical definition, but I believe ALL genders should be given equal priority, and basically nobody should be discriminated upon because of something they can't control. Which includes males. I know feminism is typically standing up for women's rights, because typically in history it's women that are underestimated and oppressed, but in today's society where for a large portion of the world, and in developed country's, women HAVE been given the opportunity to do whatever they please with their live, they HAVE been given education and treated like equals, and feminism is already coming true and all genders are allowed equality - it makes me tick to see anti-feminism/gender discrimination starting all over AGAIN from women being mean to men. Statements like 'women should be paid more than men', 'women are better than men' etc, all make me angry because it's just as discriminatory as...okay I'm getting off point here, but it seems that you...think you should get special priviledges just because your a women. You think women rely on men. You think all successful women are success because they married a rich husband. You can't find a rich husband, therefore you're mad because it seems the world is against you for being a women. False. Don't blame the opposite gender for your own shortcomings. Seeing as you're literate, and rant about things that sound suspicously like first world problems, I take it you grew up in a developed country? Which means you're also given the opportunity to get an education, grow up and become financially development regardless of gender. but it seems you've thrown that all away, and are not complaining about not being able to reply on a man. *snorts*
Im sorry if I'm getting off track, reading ur letter has been...most interesting and I don't mean any offense. I think you're a very unhappy person, even though some of it sounds like it's your fault, but I wish you luck in life. Goodness knows you need some happiness.
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A Nobody Writing Back
Is this about you? Because I can't help feeling you're a very unlikable person just from reading this...I wouldn't want you to be my friend in real life, you know why?
1) You're self-centered - everything in this letter is about yourself. You don't ask anybody else any questions, it's always I this, I that. If you don't consider other people, why do you expect them to consider you?
2) You overgeneralize the population. Either everyone is this, or that. You think all people are horrid/mean, and call them a lot of nasty names in this letter which I won't care to quote. Not everyone is like that, and if you're ignorant enough to generalize the population into categories just because they see things differently to you, well...it's no wonder why you can't find friends.
3) You overgeneralize women. This is a minor point of number 2. And it just makes me tick, as a feminist inside. I may not be a feminist by the technical definition, but I believe ALL genders should be given equal priority, and basically nobody should be discriminated upon because of something they can't control. Which includes males. I know feminism is typically standing up for women's rights, because typically in history it's women that are underestimated and oppressed, but in today's society where for a large portion of the world, and in developed country's, women HAVE been given the opportunity to do whatever they please with their live, they HAVE been given education and treated like equals, and feminism is already coming true and all genders are allowed equality - it makes me tick to see anti-feminism/gender discrimination starting all over AGAIN from women being mean to men. Statements like 'women should be paid more than men', 'women are better than men' etc, all make me angry because it's just as discriminatory as...okay I'm getting off point here, but it seems that you...think you should get special priviledges just because your a women. You think women rely on men. You think all successful women are success because they married a rich husband. You can't find a rich husband, therefore you're mad because it seems the world is against you for being a women. False. Don't blame the opposite gender for your own shortcomings. Seeing as you're literate, and rant about things that sound suspicously like first world problems, I take it you grew up in a developed country? Which means you're also given the opportunity to get an education, grow up and become financially development regardless of gender. but it seems you've thrown that all away, and are not complaining about not being able to reply on a man. *snorts*
Im sorry if I'm getting off track, reading ur letter has been...most interesting and I don't mean any offense. I think you're a very unhappy person, even though some of it sounds like it's your fault, but I wish you luck in life. Goodness knows you need some happiness.
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A Nobody Writing Back