
3/28/2015 c6
4Alouise Briggslay
Absolutely devastated by the fact that you killed Spear. Spear and Fix are so frustratingly adorable, especially Fix.
You're incredibly talented. I really hope you add to this, or even write another story set in the same universe as the one you've created because it's amazing. Better than most I've read.

Absolutely devastated by the fact that you killed Spear. Spear and Fix are so frustratingly adorable, especially Fix.
You're incredibly talented. I really hope you add to this, or even write another story set in the same universe as the one you've created because it's amazing. Better than most I've read.
1/13/2015 c6
6AraxiaJustice13
So stubborn, Spear! Ugh, just let the attachments flow and have great sex. Sheesh -.-
lol lovely chapter as always, my dear :p

So stubborn, Spear! Ugh, just let the attachments flow and have great sex. Sheesh -.-
lol lovely chapter as always, my dear :p
1/12/2015 c6 Wavern16 'Inactive
Awwww, do I smell true love?! LOL, well knowing how it's gonna end, maybe it wasn't such a good idea to get attached like that again. XD But what do I know? It makes sense, you get attached to someone and ending things won't exactly not make them attached anymore. But anywho, great work! Update soon!
Awwww, do I smell true love?! LOL, well knowing how it's gonna end, maybe it wasn't such a good idea to get attached like that again. XD But what do I know? It makes sense, you get attached to someone and ending things won't exactly not make them attached anymore. But anywho, great work! Update soon!
12/24/2014 c5 AraxiaJustice13
Oh Spear is being forever stubborn! I can see the reason behind it yet by their actions, it has been shot to hell. Tsk tsk hopefully they discuss this "issue" without breaking apart.
Oh Spear is being forever stubborn! I can see the reason behind it yet by their actions, it has been shot to hell. Tsk tsk hopefully they discuss this "issue" without breaking apart.
12/24/2014 c5 Wavern16 'Inactive
Ah man, what happened to your promise in my story, Fix? Lol, I feel kinda dumb now that I didn't think about it before, but not only is it a problem to get attached but it could also be distracting when it came to helping the community. I wish I thought of that before I published, but oh well. Great work! Like I said, I hope I did your stories justice.
Ah man, what happened to your promise in my story, Fix? Lol, I feel kinda dumb now that I didn't think about it before, but not only is it a problem to get attached but it could also be distracting when it came to helping the community. I wish I thought of that before I published, but oh well. Great work! Like I said, I hope I did your stories justice.
9/29/2014 c4 Wavern16 'Inactive
LOL, wow, really, mutation senses like Spidey senses? XD. Fix seems to love the word "F*** you", lol. Poor Spear, at least they were able to protect themselves. Great work buddy!
LOL, wow, really, mutation senses like Spidey senses? XD. Fix seems to love the word "F*** you", lol. Poor Spear, at least they were able to protect themselves. Great work buddy!
9/27/2014 c3 AraxiaJustice13
Oh this is so damn cute! Well the ending really was but anyhow, this is actually really lovely. I love Spear even more now after reading this and I feel even worse for Fix because I know how Slow Burn ended.. but I just can't stop reading this! Can't wait for your next update
Oh this is so damn cute! Well the ending really was but anyhow, this is actually really lovely. I love Spear even more now after reading this and I feel even worse for Fix because I know how Slow Burn ended.. but I just can't stop reading this! Can't wait for your next update
9/10/2014 c3 Wavern16 'Inactive
lol, the ending reminded me of when I told you to stay and you went "Bark, bark". We made that cashiere's night I bet. Great work buddy. Now, I'm starting to feel really bad for Spear. He has all this on his shoulders and I know he's not going to make it in the end, and I'm like "Ohhhh, Spear." LOL, you know how I would say that and the expression I would wear. Sorry I took so long, babysat my neice and had to go to class right after that.
lol, the ending reminded me of when I told you to stay and you went "Bark, bark". We made that cashiere's night I bet. Great work buddy. Now, I'm starting to feel really bad for Spear. He has all this on his shoulders and I know he's not going to make it in the end, and I'm like "Ohhhh, Spear." LOL, you know how I would say that and the expression I would wear. Sorry I took so long, babysat my neice and had to go to class right after that.
9/8/2014 c2 Wavern16 'Inactive
Man, a lot of things happened in this chappie! Sorry I didn't respond until now buddy, last night you texted me while I was asleep and I tried to read your text but got blinded by my phone's light in the process! LOL, but I bet you'll only laugh and say "You're sleeping, you don't need to see anyway." Anyway, great chappie! Poor guys, hope they get out of there soon!
Man, a lot of things happened in this chappie! Sorry I didn't respond until now buddy, last night you texted me while I was asleep and I tried to read your text but got blinded by my phone's light in the process! LOL, but I bet you'll only laugh and say "You're sleeping, you don't need to see anyway." Anyway, great chappie! Poor guys, hope they get out of there soon!
9/6/2014 c1 SlowBurnLover
I simply cannot wait for a next chapter! I loved Slow Burn a lot! It was probably one of my favorite stories of all time, from professional writing AND fan fiction, etc. Please continue writing with this and consider a Sequel to Slow Burn PLEASE!
I simply cannot wait for a next chapter! I loved Slow Burn a lot! It was probably one of my favorite stories of all time, from professional writing AND fan fiction, etc. Please continue writing with this and consider a Sequel to Slow Burn PLEASE!
8/29/2014 c1 Wavern16 'Inactive
Awesome buddy! I love the relationship between Fix and Spear (even though I know how it's going to end, *cringe*) You can tell how casual they are with each other through their banter. I'm sure this will be just as awesome as slow burn!
Awesome buddy! I love the relationship between Fix and Spear (even though I know how it's going to end, *cringe*) You can tell how casual they are with each other through their banter. I'm sure this will be just as awesome as slow burn!