for Copper Peak
109/11/2014 c1 Punslinger
Well, I've tried to think of ways you could make this poem better. But the problem is that you've put your own unique stamp on it so firmly that I don't want to risk taking it away from you. So I suggest that you read it over carefully and see if you can come up with any improvements. Good luck.
P.S. If you can stand a little flattery, I'm sure all the guys who read this will envy your husband.
Well, I've tried to think of ways you could make this poem better. But the problem is that you've put your own unique stamp on it so firmly that I don't want to risk taking it away from you. So I suggest that you read it over carefully and see if you can come up with any improvements. Good luck.
P.S. If you can stand a little flattery, I'm sure all the guys who read this will envy your husband.