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1/7/2015 c6 JaveHarron
Okay, you're off to a very solid start for your mystery here. The creepy poems, the unnatural tree, and the townsfolk with a secret are all great elements you manage like a master puppeteer. One element I would be curious about, though, is Jase's appearance. Looking forward to more.
1/7/2015 c2 JaveHarron
Okay, I'm really loving the introduction to your story. I'm always a sucker for a well done supernatural murder mystery, and your descriptions here are excellent and awesome. In addition, you introduce your cast with strong and memorable narrative voices. The only really negative thing (and it's not really a large issue at all) is the chapter length seems somewhat short, but hey, whatever works for a project.
10/3/2014 c5 1Tosha Goff
This is getting pretty good! I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
9/21/2014 c5 1Bryanna B
The atmosphere in your story is wonderful. I like how the mystery is building.
9/17/2014 c1 Bryanna B
You have me intrigued! I need to 'hear' the story :)
9/17/2014 c1 1Queen of the Dormice
This story is beautifully written. I love the vivid imagery, and the choice of vocabulary is gorgeous. I cannot wait to hear the legend of the Dogwood Brides.

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