3/31/2015 c7 30Black Trinity
Yolo my good friend! BT here!
Been some time since I read this again, but I don't have the time for detail. To put it simply.
Ya still got the vibes! Keep it up!
Black Trinity, Blackout.
Yolo my good friend! BT here!
Been some time since I read this again, but I don't have the time for detail. To put it simply.
Ya still got the vibes! Keep it up!
Black Trinity, Blackout.
3/31/2015 c7 3TriSX
Hey, good to see you back!
And good job with this chapter! I can't anticipate what happens next.
Hey, good to see you back!
And good job with this chapter! I can't anticipate what happens next.
3/21/2015 c6 Oneofsevens
Great read! Dying to know what comes next?
Great read! Dying to know what comes next?
11/23/2014 c6 1EttaInTimeAndSpace
Hi!
I just wanted to say I love this series, and your other stories :D I can't wait for new chapters.
Keep up the a-maz-ing work!
Hi!
I just wanted to say I love this series, and your other stories :D I can't wait for new chapters.
Keep up the a-maz-ing work!
10/27/2014 c6 10Aquade
Uh oh... Ancela might turn out to be the new O'cana. Will Mal be able to defeat him?
Uh oh... Ancela might turn out to be the new O'cana. Will Mal be able to defeat him?
10/20/2014 c5 9NovemberRose1
Yay! Tawny's coming back to life! I really wish that Koll could come back too... :-/
So, Lio's reaction to Tawny being dead, I don't know, just didn't seem right. I think I would have expected more of a reaction, more dramatics or something... But, it is your book. Just thought I would throw that out there to let you know... Keep up the amazing work!
Yay! Tawny's coming back to life! I really wish that Koll could come back too... :-/
So, Lio's reaction to Tawny being dead, I don't know, just didn't seem right. I think I would have expected more of a reaction, more dramatics or something... But, it is your book. Just thought I would throw that out there to let you know... Keep up the amazing work!
10/20/2014 c5 Aquade
So that'd why Koll never came back despite having a way. And now, he's 'sacrificing' himself so that Tawny can come back! I hope everything goes smoothly, and people don't shoot her once she awakens once more because they think she's a zombie or something. XD
So that'd why Koll never came back despite having a way. And now, he's 'sacrificing' himself so that Tawny can come back! I hope everything goes smoothly, and people don't shoot her once she awakens once more because they think she's a zombie or something. XD
10/8/2014 c4 10Aquade
Hope you feel better!
Yay! They voted on helping Tawny! This calls for a celebration!
Uh oh... Tawny is getting bored... I feel that it isn't going to end well... XD
Hope you feel better!
Yay! They voted on helping Tawny! This calls for a celebration!
Uh oh... Tawny is getting bored... I feel that it isn't going to end well... XD
10/1/2014 c3 1Krast Bannert
This series has been really good for you as a writer. Seriously, you've gotten much, much better than you were when you started. Great stuff. And I have a bunch more music suggestions, if you want to hear them. Mostly power metal and rock music, if that's alright.
This series has been really good for you as a writer. Seriously, you've gotten much, much better than you were when you started. Great stuff. And I have a bunch more music suggestions, if you want to hear them. Mostly power metal and rock music, if that's alright.
10/1/2014 c3 9NovemberRose1
Poor Koll. I felt kind of bad for him when tawny broke the news to him about Mal. Why does she keep stuttering? Is it just because of shock, or because she is hurt physically, or something wrong with her system, the one the doctor put in her? Just thought I would ask to clarify. Keep writing! As I always say, can't wait for more! :-)
Poor Koll. I felt kind of bad for him when tawny broke the news to him about Mal. Why does she keep stuttering? Is it just because of shock, or because she is hurt physically, or something wrong with her system, the one the doctor put in her? Just thought I would ask to clarify. Keep writing! As I always say, can't wait for more! :-)
9/30/2014 c3 30Black Trinity
Ah, so we have a new player who has a role in Tawny's original incarceration into the Chosen. A doctor.
Ancela plans to efficiently obtain domination, Tawny's with Koll in data-space limbo, and the chess pieces are still moving.
Dah Plot Thwickens...
WAIIIIIIII!
MOOOOOAAAAARR!
Ya get dah druillru.
Ah, so we have a new player who has a role in Tawny's original incarceration into the Chosen. A doctor.
Ancela plans to efficiently obtain domination, Tawny's with Koll in data-space limbo, and the chess pieces are still moving.
Dah Plot Thwickens...
WAIIIIIIII!
MOOOOOAAAAARR!
Ya get dah druillru.
9/30/2014 c3 10Aquade
Wow. This was an intense chapter. I guess Koll took it surprisingly well with all the news, given the circumstances. I'm glad Tawny told him herself, though, and not left him to find out himself.
Ancela and Mal are on the next step to destroying the council, and Tawny's DNA is special. I can see how Violet is so interested in her DNA, though. Imagine a world of no cancer, sicknesses, etc.
Thanks for the update and continue soon!
Wow. This was an intense chapter. I guess Koll took it surprisingly well with all the news, given the circumstances. I'm glad Tawny told him herself, though, and not left him to find out himself.
Ancela and Mal are on the next step to destroying the council, and Tawny's DNA is special. I can see how Violet is so interested in her DNA, though. Imagine a world of no cancer, sicknesses, etc.
Thanks for the update and continue soon!