2/16/2015 c3 MiranDuranDa
Very cute. You did a great job taking every day items and thoughts and giving them a magical spin. My one concrit though would be that even though the story is very well written, the main character is difficult to identify with because she never seems to have any negative emotions about the way she is used by the people around her, and that just doesn't mesh with the emotions of a real person.
Overall, great fic!
Miranda
Very cute. You did a great job taking every day items and thoughts and giving them a magical spin. My one concrit though would be that even though the story is very well written, the main character is difficult to identify with because she never seems to have any negative emotions about the way she is used by the people around her, and that just doesn't mesh with the emotions of a real person.
Overall, great fic!
Miranda
9/27/2014 c3 ReaderWriter2000
I'm sorry this chapter didn't feel right for you, but I hope it makes you feel better when I say that I loved it. The romance at the end sounded perfectly reasonable so it didn't seem forced and the realization she came to was a nice bonus. Thank you so much for going out of your way to share this! :)
I'm sorry this chapter didn't feel right for you, but I hope it makes you feel better when I say that I loved it. The romance at the end sounded perfectly reasonable so it didn't seem forced and the realization she came to was a nice bonus. Thank you so much for going out of your way to share this! :)
9/22/2014 c2 Guest
Dafuq? Dat backstory do... Whaaat?!
Dafuq? Dat backstory do... Whaaat?!
9/20/2014 c1 ReaderWriter2000
This is the bestest twist on Cinderella I have ever heard. I feel bad about her mom, but the brother in place of the step-mom and the attractive girls in place of the step-sisters are really creative. So is prince charming with tattoos and the way she thinks like it's a classic fairy tale story...there is so much amazingness with this story. Please update soon!
This is the bestest twist on Cinderella I have ever heard. I feel bad about her mom, but the brother in place of the step-mom and the attractive girls in place of the step-sisters are really creative. So is prince charming with tattoos and the way she thinks like it's a classic fairy tale story...there is so much amazingness with this story. Please update soon!
9/20/2014 c1 3Nyx Nightglade
Aww. I don't even know her name or I don't remember but this story so far is awesome. Makes me happy and a little sad at the same time.
Aww. I don't even know her name or I don't remember but this story so far is awesome. Makes me happy and a little sad at the same time.