5/11/2015 c1 Guest
Just wanted to let you know that you have two different names for the kingdoms, in the end of Ch.1 you say Carthenia, but in the second you say Carpathia

10/20/2014 c10 7Innocently Anonymous
Omg your stories are so good I love the story line please update soon.

9/24/2014 c4 1LuLaRoo7
I like this story and the last one but I don't know if you've noticed that you have posted this chapter and the last one with chapters from your last story.