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10/6/2014 c1 8LorrahBear
The flow of this poem was well done, and I enjoy how you alternated in the three bolded sections. It created a kind of ebb and flow for me, which fit well with your intention of the poem, I think.
10/4/2014 c1 Punslinger
Nice poem. Good balance of emotion and intellect, with yearning for the spiritual - as love should be.
10/2/2014 c1 182J.L.Rodriguez
I always enjoy your poetry. You express such raw emotion and universal truth in your works and this poem was wonderfully done. It is gentle, yet tremendously powerful in its presentation, especially the last two stanzas. Bravo, my friend.

Great title and picture by the way and its cool how you find such great inspiration from music.

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