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4/18/2016 c11 slcjnk2008
Amilee rocks. I'm so glad she had it out with David and realized what a creep he is and can't hold a candle to Tate. At the same time I'm dying to know more about Tate's background and what the scar means to him. - Shelley
4/18/2016 c10 slcjnk2008
I enjoyed this chapter tremendously. It is too cute to see Tate and Amilee skirt around their feelings for each other. Talk about angst, you certainly know how to write it very well and keep your readers enthralled. I'm also excited to see how you will write about the mob and what Tate is going to do as well. So I'm off to your next chapter . - Shelley
4/18/2016 c9 slcjnk2008
The way you wrote Lily was beautiful, I'm only sorry it's just such a sad situation and I like that Amilee is going to visit with her. I also felt the scene between Tate and Amilee was fantastic. They both have feelings for each other but they are still pussyfooting around them. We'll see what your next chapter will bring about. - Shelley
4/18/2016 c8 slcjnk2008
Hi LeRato, This chapter was so exciting. I found myself holding my breath until I found out Tate would be okay. But I still have so many questions about this man that wants $50,000. What's up with that? Great chapter and it sounds like Amilee's feelings for Tate are rapidly growing stronger. See you next chapter. - Shelley
4/18/2016 c7 slcjnk2008
I think the confrontation with Brittany was awesome and thought she held her own against the witch Brittany. I also question why David is calling her and why did Tate ask her to leave? So many questions with no answers yet. Another great chapter. - Shelley
4/18/2016 c6 slcjnk2008
LeRato, Do you realize how much I'm loving Tate. This chapter just demonstrated that not only is he a complete gentleman but a wonderful man and husband for Amilee. I love the way this story is unfolding and so excited to see what you are going to give us next chapter. See you there. - Shelley
4/18/2016 c5 slcjnk2008
Hi. - I think this chapter was great. It felt very informational and foundational building. For me the more detailed the story, the more realistic it becomes and you seem to excel at doing just that. I so look forward to your next chapter to see what surprises you have in store for us readers. - Shelley
4/18/2016 c4 slcjnk2008
Hi LeRato, they are such a well matched couple even if they don't know it yet. I loved the way you wrote their morning wake-up routine, it was so endearing. I am wondering why Tate wants to see David as well so I'm onto your next chapter. See you there. - Shelley
4/17/2016 c3 slcjnk2008
You are so right. They are too cute. I love the way you wrote this chapter and them. I'm so excited to see what you have planned for the next chapter so I'm going there now. See you then. - Shelley
4/17/2016 c2 slcjnk2008
Hi there, this chapter was great. I really am enjoying how you have written this chapter and your characters personalities. I'm also liking your storyline and already asking myself about Amilee's father and why she must assume her father's debt. See next chapter. - Shelley
4/17/2016 c1 slcjnk2008
Hi LeRato, I like how you started this story and I'm so excited to see where you take us now. This is going to be an exciting one given the first chapter, so I'm onto the next chapter with Tate and Amilee - Shelley
4/14/2016 c17 2Eden's Absence
This chapter was an emotional ride, and I'm glad to see that you updated. I'm looking forward to what's gonna happen next! Also, I am so very sorry for your loss and I hope you and your husband's healing comes a lot easier. She will forever be remembered in the hearts of your loved ones; and even if I don't know you, or haven't seen your daughter, she will forever be in my heart and so will you. You're an amazing writer and person and I don't doubt for a minute how beautiful your daughter was. I hope that this year gets better for you, and that you have a lot more to be radiant about.
Lots of love xx
-Candy
4/14/2016 c17 bubble
OMG IM SO GLAD YOU FINALLY UPDATED! 3 PLEASE UPDATE SOON IM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER ; - ;
4/13/2016 c17 Guest
really sorry to hear about your loss.
you and your hisband sound so cute and youre both really brave and admirable for working through something like this.
i wish you all the best!
4/13/2016 c17 Blackdraumdancer
:*(
Great chapter, thank you!
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