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6Darth Zannacross
Ugh, the only thing worst then a rat is a rat that can control Blood, Splinter they are not.
Well, Round showed those Rats who is boss...and...not much else to be honest other then cool plood attacks.
6Darth ZannacrossUgh, the only thing worst then a rat is a rat that can control Blood, Splinter they are not.
Well, Round showed those Rats who is boss...and...not much else to be honest other then cool plood attacks.
2/1/2020 c3 Darth Zannacross
Ah vampires, they always make things suck.
Well, had no Vampire Killer or what not but while he did not pull it off as smoothly as Alucard. Well, more enemies down, lets see how things go from here.
Ah vampires, they always make things suck.
Well, had no Vampire Killer or what not but while he did not pull it off as smoothly as Alucard. Well, more enemies down, lets see how things go from here.
2/1/2020 c8 34Starart152
This is a nice chapter with some nice detail about was might be going on in this abandoned building. That place seemed shady and some secrets they are going to discover.
I am wondering why Soda wanted to go in there and what she wanted to find out.
34Starart152This is a nice chapter with some nice detail about was might be going on in this abandoned building. That place seemed shady and some secrets they are going to discover.
I am wondering why Soda wanted to go in there and what she wanted to find out.
1/31/2020 c2 6Darth Zannacross
Oh Spiderwoman...always such nasty people to deal with, aside from the Spider-Woman from Spiderman but, she was human first lol.
Thankfully Round might not be the man with the Golden Gun but its special enough to get the job done, nearly as wacky as the gun user in Jojo lol.
Well, we will see how things go from here.
6Darth ZannacrossOh Spiderwoman...always such nasty people to deal with, aside from the Spider-Woman from Spiderman but, she was human first lol.
Thankfully Round might not be the man with the Golden Gun but its special enough to get the job done, nearly as wacky as the gun user in Jojo lol.
Well, we will see how things go from here.
1/29/2020 c1 Darth Zannacross
Hey their Pages, been a while so figured I check out one of your older stories.
A month for the devil eh? How, satanic lol.
Well, we got a lot of variety with this cast, still to early to get to much about Round, Jarecleur, Sode, and Choque but seems like it could lead to some fun, we will see how the mission goes.
Hey their Pages, been a while so figured I check out one of your older stories.
A month for the devil eh? How, satanic lol.
Well, we got a lot of variety with this cast, still to early to get to much about Round, Jarecleur, Sode, and Choque but seems like it could lead to some fun, we will see how the mission goes.
5/5/2015 c1 19dmasterxd
All right this was good start and you introduced all your characters really well. Usually I refrain from giving my opinions on the characters individually until a couple chapters in, but I just gotta say that I really like round. I can't even say why yet I just do haha.
Now on the subject of the whole vampire and werewolf thing. I've always been fine with these kind of stories, even if they don't do something unexpected, as long as it's done well, I'm happy. Also was that vampire book referencing the one I think it was? XD
Also just something that is kinda bugging me is Sode not having a weapon. I mean even if she is a scout that is major weakness all the antagonists can exploit. I don't know it just kinda worries me...unless that's what you're going for?
And lastly, I know I usually don't say anything about the technical writing parts of anyone's stories. But I can't help but mention it feels like your skills in that area have subtly improved. Just had to let you know. All in all it's an awesome chapter and I look forward to more.
19dmasterxdAll right this was good start and you introduced all your characters really well. Usually I refrain from giving my opinions on the characters individually until a couple chapters in, but I just gotta say that I really like round. I can't even say why yet I just do haha.
Now on the subject of the whole vampire and werewolf thing. I've always been fine with these kind of stories, even if they don't do something unexpected, as long as it's done well, I'm happy. Also was that vampire book referencing the one I think it was? XD
Also just something that is kinda bugging me is Sode not having a weapon. I mean even if she is a scout that is major weakness all the antagonists can exploit. I don't know it just kinda worries me...unless that's what you're going for?
And lastly, I know I usually don't say anything about the technical writing parts of anyone's stories. But I can't help but mention it feels like your skills in that area have subtly improved. Just had to let you know. All in all it's an awesome chapter and I look forward to more.
4/30/2015 c7 34Starart152
It was a nice chapter. The action was short, but it was interresting to see how powerful Choque was to handle someone from the knight. The four main charactesr are obviously stronger than D Class.
I think they are in deep trouble. The questions is why the knights ordered the attack.
34Starart152It was a nice chapter. The action was short, but it was interresting to see how powerful Choque was to handle someone from the knight. The four main charactesr are obviously stronger than D Class.
I think they are in deep trouble. The questions is why the knights ordered the attack.
4/28/2015 c6 Starart152
It's a nice chapter with a few questions about the missions the main characters had. I'm not sure what they usually had, but I think it's usually fighting against bad demons who are doing illegal stuff rather than delivering package.
I wonder who's the one attacking Choque.
It's a nice chapter with a few questions about the missions the main characters had. I'm not sure what they usually had, but I think it's usually fighting against bad demons who are doing illegal stuff rather than delivering package.
I wonder who's the one attacking Choque.
4/23/2015 c7 7KayteaMathematics
I really enjoyed this story so far. I love when Round gets going about food or how the others don't appreciate his sense of style. It's pretty humorous.
For this story I would say that you have a lot of fights, not that its necessarily a bad thing, it's just that there are a lot in short intervals. This might just be a personal taste thing. And the fights tend to be short without much challenge. Tho its still early so this doesn't bother me too much.
But besides that, I love it.
7KayteaMathematicsI really enjoyed this story so far. I love when Round gets going about food or how the others don't appreciate his sense of style. It's pretty humorous.
For this story I would say that you have a lot of fights, not that its necessarily a bad thing, it's just that there are a lot in short intervals. This might just be a personal taste thing. And the fights tend to be short without much challenge. Tho its still early so this doesn't bother me too much.
But besides that, I love it.
4/22/2015 c5 34Starart152
This was a good chapter. The fight was short, but it was explained well why the fight couldn't get longer in this case. The delivery had some mystery with it's content and also why they are more powerful than the rank they are currently in.
I spot one mistakes when Round said: [...] but that's no the point. I think you mean: [...] but that's not the point.
34Starart152This was a good chapter. The fight was short, but it was explained well why the fight couldn't get longer in this case. The delivery had some mystery with it's content and also why they are more powerful than the rank they are currently in.
I spot one mistakes when Round said: [...] but that's no the point. I think you mean: [...] but that's not the point.
2/27/2015 c3 2YumehaMinakami
Somehow, i strangely feel some Claymore vibes in this chapter.
By the way, was the first paragraphs, especially the paragraphs with Harceleur's first dialogues meant to be written like that? It's a bit confusing and has quite a bit of misspells.
Anyways, Choque still has her 'social-attitude", makes me wonder if she is really just confident of herself or something. I like her.
2YumehaMinakamiSomehow, i strangely feel some Claymore vibes in this chapter.
By the way, was the first paragraphs, especially the paragraphs with Harceleur's first dialogues meant to be written like that? It's a bit confusing and has quite a bit of misspells.
Anyways, Choque still has her 'social-attitude", makes me wonder if she is really just confident of herself or something. I like her.
2/25/2015 c4 34Starart152
This chapter has a simple mission and showed a little about Round. We know he's not the kind to say too much and knows when to shout his mouth.
Although, he might said something.
34Starart152This chapter has a simple mission and showed a little about Round. We know he's not the kind to say too much and knows when to shout his mouth.
Although, he might said something.
2/24/2015 c2 2YumehaMinakami
Alright, now Choque has some serious social problems, well at least she seems to be the tough kind of character on the outside at least.
The fight scene here on the last part was short but action-filled. Though Round was actually pretty cool with the gun I might say, just a few tweeks on how he uses it and it will be all good. Especially his gun was "not really normal along with the bullets."
Anyway, good chapter that might lead to something in the next chapter's events.
2YumehaMinakamiAlright, now Choque has some serious social problems, well at least she seems to be the tough kind of character on the outside at least.
The fight scene here on the last part was short but action-filled. Though Round was actually pretty cool with the gun I might say, just a few tweeks on how he uses it and it will be all good. Especially his gun was "not really normal along with the bullets."
Anyway, good chapter that might lead to something in the next chapter's events.
2/23/2015 c3 34Starart152
The chapter was well done. Harceleur managed to obtain some information against a scorpion demon.
As for Round, it's good to notice that as a human, he has a few weak spot.
34Starart152The chapter was well done. Harceleur managed to obtain some information against a scorpion demon.
As for Round, it's good to notice that as a human, he has a few weak spot.
2/22/2015 c2 Starart152
This chapter was short, but the action was interesting and brief. I like how the bullet were efficient against the demon and I wonder what will happen next and where the weapons really are.
This chapter was short, but the action was interesting and brief. I like how the bullet were efficient against the demon and I wonder what will happen next and where the weapons really are.