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6Darth Zannacross
So Tsukiko plans to both be Zero AND Kamina from Gurren-Lugan? Does she have both Gease and Spiral powers? If not, this really will take a miracle. Well, nice to see the RAIN members and see how they got through that, still no sigh of Macbeth it seems, wonder when he will show up. Well, not to much to say with how short this chapter is really, just seeing if are princess here is just delusional or not.
Also, Xaiver is starting to remind me of Schneizel from Code Geass and Treize from Gundam Wing, guess we will see if he goes through with ideology and plans like those guys, we will see.
Well, time to see just what is up with our Rose Princess here, till next time.
6Darth ZannacrossSo Tsukiko plans to both be Zero AND Kamina from Gurren-Lugan? Does she have both Gease and Spiral powers? If not, this really will take a miracle. Well, nice to see the RAIN members and see how they got through that, still no sigh of Macbeth it seems, wonder when he will show up. Well, not to much to say with how short this chapter is really, just seeing if are princess here is just delusional or not.
Also, Xaiver is starting to remind me of Schneizel from Code Geass and Treize from Gundam Wing, guess we will see if he goes through with ideology and plans like those guys, we will see.
Well, time to see just what is up with our Rose Princess here, till next time.
1/16/2015 c13 Darth Zannacross
Well, this bickering seems to indicate how divided the high command of the military is, that might make it easy for Azure and co I suppose if they play off those divisions. This Wendy, seems like the same kind of gal as Olivia Armstrong from Full Metal, quite the aggressive type. I wonder if she to will become a ally?
Well, I suppose she could also just be really angry and brutal like Grand Admiral Daala from the Star Wars books, we will see but , shows were things stand, and no doubt in my mind Forsythe is plotting something ambitious.
Well, meanwhile, at least they got some new, er, old recruits. Well, nice to see a bit of the band is getting back together though unless Octavius and Miranda got superpowers or something really powerful them alone won't seem to amount to much, still not sure if Tsukikio has a legit idea on how to win or is just winging it, guess we will see soon.
Looking forward to where this leads so keep it up, and till next time.
Well, this bickering seems to indicate how divided the high command of the military is, that might make it easy for Azure and co I suppose if they play off those divisions. This Wendy, seems like the same kind of gal as Olivia Armstrong from Full Metal, quite the aggressive type. I wonder if she to will become a ally?
Well, I suppose she could also just be really angry and brutal like Grand Admiral Daala from the Star Wars books, we will see but , shows were things stand, and no doubt in my mind Forsythe is plotting something ambitious.
Well, meanwhile, at least they got some new, er, old recruits. Well, nice to see a bit of the band is getting back together though unless Octavius and Miranda got superpowers or something really powerful them alone won't seem to amount to much, still not sure if Tsukikio has a legit idea on how to win or is just winging it, guess we will see soon.
Looking forward to where this leads so keep it up, and till next time.
1/16/2015 c13 3Miles Montgomery
And some of our original rebels make an entrance. I wonder if Miranda and Octavius are only the beginning of their army or is it going to be 6 versus the GBE?
It's hard to be good with reviews when you make so few mistakes, Wong.
Anyways, looking forward to the next update.
3Miles MontgomeryAnd some of our original rebels make an entrance. I wonder if Miranda and Octavius are only the beginning of their army or is it going to be 6 versus the GBE?
It's hard to be good with reviews when you make so few mistakes, Wong.
Anyways, looking forward to the next update.
1/9/2015 c12 6Darth Zannacross
So, Tsukiko could not just get her own Webcam or something V from Vendetta style? I thought that they had such things since they have mech's after all, maybe not.
So, Tsukio's speech was nice but, I hope she has a plan behind this or it sounds like a lot of people are going to gather to get blown to hell. I guess now will be a good time to reveal she mastered the power of Geass since before, or something.
Well, not sure what to make about Kimmel, will he join the party or, join a ditch?
So, guess its time for the gang to show what they got, see if they can pull a Zero like stunt, maybe escape to china? Only one way to find out, I am quite excited to see how this cliffhanger is resolved so till next time Wong.
6Darth ZannacrossSo, Tsukiko could not just get her own Webcam or something V from Vendetta style? I thought that they had such things since they have mech's after all, maybe not.
So, Tsukio's speech was nice but, I hope she has a plan behind this or it sounds like a lot of people are going to gather to get blown to hell. I guess now will be a good time to reveal she mastered the power of Geass since before, or something.
Well, not sure what to make about Kimmel, will he join the party or, join a ditch?
So, guess its time for the gang to show what they got, see if they can pull a Zero like stunt, maybe escape to china? Only one way to find out, I am quite excited to see how this cliffhanger is resolved so till next time Wong.
1/9/2015 c12 3Miles Montgomery
Excellent penmanship again. I cannot find anything wrong with your writing this time either.
A war. Wow. I have a feeling things are beginning to heat up. Let's see what happens.
3Miles MontgomeryExcellent penmanship again. I cannot find anything wrong with your writing this time either.
A war. Wow. I have a feeling things are beginning to heat up. Let's see what happens.
1/6/2015 c11 Miles Montgomery
Caught up so far. Interestingly written, even if the plot is a bit weaker this time. I believe it's due to the disappearance of some of it's major characters. But, I'm confident that you will introduce some new and old ones soon that will fortify the plot some more. Keep up the good work. :)
Caught up so far. Interestingly written, even if the plot is a bit weaker this time. I believe it's due to the disappearance of some of it's major characters. But, I'm confident that you will introduce some new and old ones soon that will fortify the plot some more. Keep up the good work. :)
1/6/2015 c10 Miles Montgomery
The duo is back together again. I've always enjoyed these two together and still think they'd make a great couple.
That fight was a little short, honestly, and concluded too easily. I doubt Astra is dead, though.
The duo is back together again. I've always enjoyed these two together and still think they'd make a great couple.
That fight was a little short, honestly, and concluded too easily. I doubt Astra is dead, though.
1/6/2015 c9 Miles Montgomery
Oh no. It's the Joker-wannabe again. I thought he was already dealt with. Let's see if Azure and Tsukiko still make the great team they used to.
Oh no. It's the Joker-wannabe again. I thought he was already dealt with. Let's see if Azure and Tsukiko still make the great team they used to.
1/6/2015 c8 Miles Montgomery
Azure is a really nice guy. I guess this means he's in charge of Valhalla now? Maybe his father's plan will finally be revealed.
Azure is a really nice guy. I guess this means he's in charge of Valhalla now? Maybe his father's plan will finally be revealed.
1/6/2015 c7 Miles Montgomery
Plots within plots, political subterfuge, and lots of dialogue. How do you do it? I wish I could write like this.
Anyways, I miss Tsukiko as well. I'm enjoying the story, but I'm also impatiently waiting for Tsukiko to become Queen.
Plots within plots, political subterfuge, and lots of dialogue. How do you do it? I wish I could write like this.
Anyways, I miss Tsukiko as well. I'm enjoying the story, but I'm also impatiently waiting for Tsukiko to become Queen.
1/6/2015 c6 Miles Montgomery
convincingreasons needs to be convincing reasons.
I think I need a reminder who Ophelia is. Sounds familiar. Anyways, just one error this time. Keep up the good work :)
convincingreasons needs to be convincing reasons.
I think I need a reminder who Ophelia is. Sounds familiar. Anyways, just one error this time. Keep up the good work :)
1/6/2015 c5 Miles Montgomery
You left a word out. When Azure asks Sheffield about Tsukiko, he says he's afraid instead of afraid not.
Still masterful storytelling. Next chapter.
You left a word out. When Azure asks Sheffield about Tsukiko, he says he's afraid instead of afraid not.
Still masterful storytelling. Next chapter.
12/19/2014 c11 6Darth Zannacross
Well, beat Astra, failed at tea, uneven victory? Lol, maybe not. Well, Tsukiko is getting rather reckless, I suppose she wants to form her own Black Knights? Or, her own Rain, only one that's doing what its suppose to do? Well, we will see, even she admits she does not know the full weight of what she is about to do. Well, we will see.
6Darth ZannacrossWell, beat Astra, failed at tea, uneven victory? Lol, maybe not. Well, Tsukiko is getting rather reckless, I suppose she wants to form her own Black Knights? Or, her own Rain, only one that's doing what its suppose to do? Well, we will see, even she admits she does not know the full weight of what she is about to do. Well, we will see.
12/12/2014 c10 Darth Zannacross
Well, Astra is quickly becoming Team Rocket, or at least Zagi from Tales of Versperia with being reduced to pest status. Well, at least the two work well as a team despite being gone for so long. So,now she wants to meet Chetenham, not sure how that will go, we will see.
Well, Astra is quickly becoming Team Rocket, or at least Zagi from Tales of Versperia with being reduced to pest status. Well, at least the two work well as a team despite being gone for so long. So,now she wants to meet Chetenham, not sure how that will go, we will see.