1/3/2016 c13 4Lolitroy
I read this in one sitting.
Don't really like smut, but I read yours. You don't just write mindless sex, and that's what makes it pleasant to read. I feel like I'm still reading about Elise and Eliott, which by the way are this year's OTP for me so far :D
You have me completely hooked. Please do update!
I read this in one sitting.
Don't really like smut, but I read yours. You don't just write mindless sex, and that's what makes it pleasant to read. I feel like I'm still reading about Elise and Eliott, which by the way are this year's OTP for me so far :D
You have me completely hooked. Please do update!
3/2/2015 c11 Sherry
10/10 for creative use of the eggplant emoji.
10/10 for creative use of the eggplant emoji.
2/27/2015 c11 OhKai
elise is not going to think about what others think right?
i mean harry is an ass too lol
i just hope harry finds it ASAP, so it will get right at his face ... he annoys me now
isn't it interesting when i used to ship both of them? haha
elise is not going to think about what others think right?
i mean harry is an ass too lol
i just hope harry finds it ASAP, so it will get right at his face ... he annoys me now
isn't it interesting when i used to ship both of them? haha
2/27/2015 c11 botherthebee
"the cookie-cutter golden boy, corrupted by the sins of my flesh" oh shit that's good, this chapter though, daaaaaamn.
"the cookie-cutter golden boy, corrupted by the sins of my flesh" oh shit that's good, this chapter though, daaaaaamn.
2/26/2015 c10 6happysally
Finally got time to catch up. Oh my goodness, I loved the parts of the story from Elliot's POV, completely adorable, I love him.
I hope now he knows about Harry that he won't feel back about liking Elise so much. And I really hope that's where he's heading after he stormed out of the gym.
I totally get that Harry and Elise aren't really in a relationship, but I don't think Harry should be keeping his plans to be with Kelly from her. That's not really fair on Kelly either.
I'm 100% team Elliot!
Can't wait for an update!
Finally got time to catch up. Oh my goodness, I loved the parts of the story from Elliot's POV, completely adorable, I love him.
I hope now he knows about Harry that he won't feel back about liking Elise so much. And I really hope that's where he's heading after he stormed out of the gym.
I totally get that Harry and Elise aren't really in a relationship, but I don't think Harry should be keeping his plans to be with Kelly from her. That's not really fair on Kelly either.
I'm 100% team Elliot!
Can't wait for an update!
2/26/2015 c2 10Be My Valentine
Reaching the end of this chapter, you've convinced me to add this to story alert. The narrative is really strong, and so early on in your piece, it's quite an accomplishment.
Reaching the end of this chapter, you've convinced me to add this to story alert. The narrative is really strong, and so early on in your piece, it's quite an accomplishment.
2/23/2015 c7 6happysally
I was going to wait until I had caught up to review again, but this chapter was sort of completely adorable.
Elise and Elliot are really adorable when they're together and it is so refreshing to have a female protagonist who isn't ashamed of her sex life.
This chapter also changed my view of Harry... I don't feel like he had right to get mad.
Gonna read the rest now! :)
I was going to wait until I had caught up to review again, but this chapter was sort of completely adorable.
Elise and Elliot are really adorable when they're together and it is so refreshing to have a female protagonist who isn't ashamed of her sex life.
This chapter also changed my view of Harry... I don't feel like he had right to get mad.
Gonna read the rest now! :)
2/22/2015 c1 happysally
This is a really good opening chapter. It sets up the storyline very well and introduces Elise as a very interesting protagonist.
I'm really excited to read the rest!
This is a really good opening chapter. It sets up the storyline very well and introduces Elise as a very interesting protagonist.
I'm really excited to read the rest!
2/19/2015 c10 OhKai
oh well he still hung over kelly
that's disappointing . harry is such a dumbass lol
elise doesn't need a guy like him ugh it makes me mad lol elliot needs to move ASAP, so it will punch right at harry's face
oh well he still hung over kelly
that's disappointing . harry is such a dumbass lol
elise doesn't need a guy like him ugh it makes me mad lol elliot needs to move ASAP, so it will punch right at harry's face
2/19/2015 c10 Sherry
oooh i just found this! i love it!
oooh i just found this! i love it!