9/10/2015 c16 joshchiu3
I really like this! It has a sense of parable to it, like a Narnian-esque, Lord-of-the-Rings-like fable. Especially the descriptions in the beginning. Overall, a wonderful defining of the word Courage.
I really like this! It has a sense of parable to it, like a Narnian-esque, Lord-of-the-Rings-like fable. Especially the descriptions in the beginning. Overall, a wonderful defining of the word Courage.
9/7/2015 c2 joshchiu3
I see there is going to be some power inheriting very soon, from fairy to boy...
A proofreading note: The line third to the bottom, "they exclaimed joyfully to me", should be, "he exclaimed joyfully to me", unless you intended for Winter to be speaking to multiple people.
I see there is going to be some power inheriting very soon, from fairy to boy...
A proofreading note: The line third to the bottom, "they exclaimed joyfully to me", should be, "he exclaimed joyfully to me", unless you intended for Winter to be speaking to multiple people.