for The Zodiac Chronicles: Lyatria - Pray & Predator Book 12/17/2015 c4 
2BLKGURLSMUSE
Well, Ilivogs certainly thinks highly of his-self. (love the names BTW, so very original). I think it's genius that you created a language too! Very exciting chapter.
2BLKGURLSMUSEWell, Ilivogs certainly thinks highly of his-self. (love the names BTW, so very original). I think it's genius that you created a language too! Very exciting chapter.
2/6/2015 c2 BLKGURLSMUSE
I did enjoy this chapter. I like the history you give on the elven clans. I also love the description of each character. Very good job.
I did enjoy this chapter. I like the history you give on the elven clans. I also love the description of each character. Very good job.
11/20/2014 c1 Wendy Thompson135th
There is no reason to publish this unedited draft.
The procedure of writing for post goes like this: Write. Edit. Post. Do NOT foist unedited sloppy drafts. It's not fair to the innocent readers.
Further, there is a Nation Novel Editing Month (March). Write your draft, let it sit over the holidays, spend March editing it into reasonable shape, then -AND ONLY THEN, post it.
There is no reason to publish this unedited draft.
The procedure of writing for post goes like this: Write. Edit. Post. Do NOT foist unedited sloppy drafts. It's not fair to the innocent readers.
Further, there is a Nation Novel Editing Month (March). Write your draft, let it sit over the holidays, spend March editing it into reasonable shape, then -AND ONLY THEN, post it.
11/3/2014 c6 RomanceObsessed
I am a little confused. How did Eiravel find out about what happened with the ranger? Dunni was the one who helped her. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing major.
I am a little confused. How did Eiravel find out about what happened with the ranger? Dunni was the one who helped her. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing major.
10/11/2014 c4 RomanceObsessed
This story is great so far. I do sometimes mix up the names when reading though.
This story is great so far. I do sometimes mix up the names when reading though.