10/12/2014 c1 90Timbo Slice
As a huge fan of Greek mythology I gotta say I really like your interpretation of the Gods and the way you portrayed heir abilities. Even though they are literally larger than life figures you portray them with a touching human quality, even Hades comes across as redeemable (if a little toned down from the legends. Persephones characterization is also good as the young woman trapped between obeying her mother and wanderlust and I loved how you incorporated nearly every main deity throughout the work from the main characters to just name dropping, you really did your homework on this!

A simple story set within the backdrop of legend, awesome start!