for Luxerion4/6/2015 c7 Happy
I like the brotherly bond, I think that's the highlight of the story, with the powers coming close second. I don't know where the plot was going, so I'm not sure what you'd change, but I'm sure whatever you do will be great!
I like the brotherly bond, I think that's the highlight of the story, with the powers coming close second. I don't know where the plot was going, so I'm not sure what you'd change, but I'm sure whatever you do will be great!
1/31/2015 c7 Happy
Hope you're better soon!
Hope you're better soon!
12/13/2014 c6 Guest
I'm interested to see if there's going to be some tension between the brothers, well mostly connected to Aarick, but I like that they're pulling a united front from now, I hope they can all stick together!
I'm interested to see if there's going to be some tension between the brothers, well mostly connected to Aarick, but I like that they're pulling a united front from now, I hope they can all stick together!
12/13/2014 c6 Happy
Loved that ending line. I'm not sure what to make of Aarick - he's watched a lot of torture and death and hasn't tried to stop it. I wonder how badly damaged his conscience is. I like that Ajax and Howie were nice to him though, they've got to be stronger together!
Loved that ending line. I'm not sure what to make of Aarick - he's watched a lot of torture and death and hasn't tried to stop it. I wonder how badly damaged his conscience is. I like that Ajax and Howie were nice to him though, they've got to be stronger together!
11/28/2014 c5 Guest
I loved this! Thought it was good when their mental messaging was cut off. Wonder why they couldn't sense the MIA brother before using these mental powers? Unless I've misunderstood something. Either way, I like that the bad guys were taunting Daemon because they think the brothers will follow his lead..and maybe coz he's the most powerful one being oldest? More soon please.
I loved this! Thought it was good when their mental messaging was cut off. Wonder why they couldn't sense the MIA brother before using these mental powers? Unless I've misunderstood something. Either way, I like that the bad guys were taunting Daemon because they think the brothers will follow his lead..and maybe coz he's the most powerful one being oldest? More soon please.
11/28/2014 c5 Happy
Amazing update! I didn't expect Dae to explode like that, but they were goading and goading him and hurting Lux, and I absolutely love that they scuttled away all terrified from him! The collars are a major concern though, I'm scared that Dae has just made everything worse longterm.. unless they can get the others out of the capsule things and they can combine their powers to get the collars off? It feels like it would take to much time though. So cute, and very clever that Dae completely drained himself and that Lux shared his power to reinvigorate him!
Amazing update! I didn't expect Dae to explode like that, but they were goading and goading him and hurting Lux, and I absolutely love that they scuttled away all terrified from him! The collars are a major concern though, I'm scared that Dae has just made everything worse longterm.. unless they can get the others out of the capsule things and they can combine their powers to get the collars off? It feels like it would take to much time though. So cute, and very clever that Dae completely drained himself and that Lux shared his power to reinvigorate him!
11/23/2014 c4 Guest
Fast pace is right! And I love that about this fic. I still can't decide who my favourite brother is, but I know I adore them all!
Fast pace is right! And I love that about this fic. I still can't decide who my favourite brother is, but I know I adore them all!
11/23/2014 c4 Happy
Thank you so much for explaining the ages! This was such a tense chapter, I can't believe how cruel they were to Lux and Ajax - is it all just to make Dae do as they say? Being reunited with their brother will be so strange because they are so close-knit and he is a stranger to all of them! I'm excited to see how he affects the dynamic. Such a good chapter!
Thank you so much for explaining the ages! This was such a tense chapter, I can't believe how cruel they were to Lux and Ajax - is it all just to make Dae do as they say? Being reunited with their brother will be so strange because they are so close-knit and he is a stranger to all of them! I'm excited to see how he affects the dynamic. Such a good chapter!
11/7/2014 c3 Happy
Is the fifth brother going to come back into it in some way? As far as I can tell from the ages: the boys are currently 23, 18, 16 and 7 when the parents were killed they were 17, 12, 10 and 1, and when the fifth brother was killed Dae was 7 and Ajax was 2, and Howie was concieved or just born. They are all cuties anyway, and I want to give them all cuddles! Write more soon please!
Is the fifth brother going to come back into it in some way? As far as I can tell from the ages: the boys are currently 23, 18, 16 and 7 when the parents were killed they were 17, 12, 10 and 1, and when the fifth brother was killed Dae was 7 and Ajax was 2, and Howie was concieved or just born. They are all cuties anyway, and I want to give them all cuddles! Write more soon please!
11/7/2014 c3 Guest
It's really gripping! I hope Howie can comfort Lux a little. I like the new characters you introduced too, I'm wondering what they're up to and who the most dangerous one is!
It's really gripping! I hope Howie can comfort Lux a little. I like the new characters you introduced too, I'm wondering what they're up to and who the most dangerous one is!
11/6/2014 c3 
6XcutionENT
Unique. Very unique. One of the rare times I actually say that about a story. Good job
6XcutionENTUnique. Very unique. One of the rare times I actually say that about a story. Good job
11/3/2014 c2 Guest
This is so exciting! I love all the boys, I don't want anyone to hurt them!
This is so exciting! I love all the boys, I don't want anyone to hurt them!