
3/31/2015 c3
6Carmel March
So amazing. I loved it. So cute and sweet and a perfect pick-me-up after a long day. Your writing just gets better and better, really, and I'm definitely checking out whatever else you come out with :) Thank you so much for posting this story!

So amazing. I loved it. So cute and sweet and a perfect pick-me-up after a long day. Your writing just gets better and better, really, and I'm definitely checking out whatever else you come out with :) Thank you so much for posting this story!
3/25/2015 c3
12scattering the wind
Review Challenge: To sleep. Like legit my plans are to sleep. My favourite TV show couple? N/A currently. JUST beginning Doctor Who. And I have "Blank Space" by Taylor Swift stuck in my head.
Also: I love this story so, so much. This end chapter was amazing. I never really viewed Landon as the aggressive type, but the whole setting made total sense for the fight.
You gave us a really strong empathetic link to Beverly, whom I loved and admired for showing her apology and love for Landon in her strongest suit - it means a lot, if you think about it.
Anyway, THIS WAS SO SWEET AND WONDERFUL AND I WAS LIKE "AW!" AND IT WAS PURE AWESOMENESS!

Review Challenge: To sleep. Like legit my plans are to sleep. My favourite TV show couple? N/A currently. JUST beginning Doctor Who. And I have "Blank Space" by Taylor Swift stuck in my head.
Also: I love this story so, so much. This end chapter was amazing. I never really viewed Landon as the aggressive type, but the whole setting made total sense for the fight.
You gave us a really strong empathetic link to Beverly, whom I loved and admired for showing her apology and love for Landon in her strongest suit - it means a lot, if you think about it.
Anyway, THIS WAS SO SWEET AND WONDERFUL AND I WAS LIKE "AW!" AND IT WAS PURE AWESOMENESS!
3/24/2015 c3 Guest
Really good. I love the plot and the characters. I am looking forward to your next work.
Really good. I love the plot and the characters. I am looking forward to your next work.
3/24/2015 c3 Guest
This is simply great!
This is simply great!
2/8/2015 c2
5Skullszeyes
This is so freaking awesome. xD Love the way you write. Hope you update soon.

This is so freaking awesome. xD Love the way you write. Hope you update soon.
1/20/2015 c2
6Carmel March
This was SO good. Such a great second chapter. Your writing is so flowing and descriptive and it's really what draws me in. I can't wait for the next chapter!

This was SO good. Such a great second chapter. Your writing is so flowing and descriptive and it's really what draws me in. I can't wait for the next chapter!
12/30/2014 c2 meetam
I LOVE IT
I love the kiss and how you make everything so soft. It was a lot different from the first kiss in TOW (which was super intense), but I like this more! The two characters just fit together so well!
Review Challenge: I'm going to learn the ukulele yaaaaas! I am looking forward to a lot of things, mostly going to college. And the second Avengers movie OMG. I like any cookie as long as it's Christmas tree-shaped. Haha I'm just kidding, I don't know my favorite holiday sweet.
I LOVE IT
I love the kiss and how you make everything so soft. It was a lot different from the first kiss in TOW (which was super intense), but I like this more! The two characters just fit together so well!
Review Challenge: I'm going to learn the ukulele yaaaaas! I am looking forward to a lot of things, mostly going to college. And the second Avengers movie OMG. I like any cookie as long as it's Christmas tree-shaped. Haha I'm just kidding, I don't know my favorite holiday sweet.
12/30/2014 c2 deets1
I really like this story. I just hope those two don't regret this shotgun relationship. Everyone knows that generally slow and steady wins the race, but I'm hoping they're wrong on a case by case basis.
And your descriptions are beautiful by the way. You write like she paints. It's an art unto itself.
I really like this story. I just hope those two don't regret this shotgun relationship. Everyone knows that generally slow and steady wins the race, but I'm hoping they're wrong on a case by case basis.
And your descriptions are beautiful by the way. You write like she paints. It's an art unto itself.
12/29/2014 c2
12scattering the wind
Review Challenge: Chase my dreams and if I trip and fall to get right back up again, I'm looking forward to being able to look forward to things once I have an inkling of something to look forward to, and candy canes. They aren't just for Christmas. ;)
Now to the actual review: this was just like - I can't even -
Yeah, I'm eloquent. BUT I FANGIRLED LIKE CRAZY BECAUSE BEV AND LANDON KISSED AND IT WAS LIKE A TOTAL 'AW!' MOMENT! And now you know that I fangirl in all caps.
It was beautiful and sort of classic and revealed just a bit more of everything. Amazing job on this! I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon, please?
Sincerely,
Scatter

Review Challenge: Chase my dreams and if I trip and fall to get right back up again, I'm looking forward to being able to look forward to things once I have an inkling of something to look forward to, and candy canes. They aren't just for Christmas. ;)
Now to the actual review: this was just like - I can't even -
Yeah, I'm eloquent. BUT I FANGIRLED LIKE CRAZY BECAUSE BEV AND LANDON KISSED AND IT WAS LIKE A TOTAL 'AW!' MOMENT! And now you know that I fangirl in all caps.
It was beautiful and sort of classic and revealed just a bit more of everything. Amazing job on this! I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon, please?
Sincerely,
Scatter
12/2/2014 c1 Mar
Looooooved the first part! Such a different take on a story, following a graffiti artist. I'm a big fan of Banksy, I almost imagine Beverly to be the younger version. Great beginning, looking forward to the next two chapters!
Looooooved the first part! Such a different take on a story, following a graffiti artist. I'm a big fan of Banksy, I almost imagine Beverly to be the younger version. Great beginning, looking forward to the next two chapters!
10/17/2014 c1 scattering the wind
Review Challenge: The windy yet warm days, I have no idea what that is and which book are you referring to? I'm reading over 3 of them.
Anywho, I love love love love this! It's actually pretty realistic, which I'm rather impressed with, and the idea is genius. I honestly can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon, please?
Review Challenge: The windy yet warm days, I have no idea what that is and which book are you referring to? I'm reading over 3 of them.
Anywho, I love love love love this! It's actually pretty realistic, which I'm rather impressed with, and the idea is genius. I honestly can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon, please?
10/17/2014 c1 Guest
if landon hadn't noticed that beverly was nexus at first sight, then why was he staring at her in the first place?
if landon hadn't noticed that beverly was nexus at first sight, then why was he staring at her in the first place?
10/16/2014 c1
6Carmel March
This is so great, and such a cool concept of having a three-shot! I'm really looking forward to the next part!

This is so great, and such a cool concept of having a three-shot! I'm really looking forward to the next part!
10/14/2014 c1
3lilbabykiwi
There's only a few mistakes in here, which I don't give a shit about. I'm just here to tell you that your writing is amazing...and you're in marching band. :)

There's only a few mistakes in here, which I don't give a shit about. I'm just here to tell you that your writing is amazing...and you're in marching band. :)