for How Not To Write Romance11/26/2014 c2 
7The Latest Plague
this is hilarious... but, i have to say, i find nothing wrong with a good cliche.
7The Latest Plaguethis is hilarious... but, i have to say, i find nothing wrong with a good cliche.
11/16/2014 c2 2Rachel032687
Breaking the oldest of rules, in the newest of ways! Also, I have (in life) said, "You have gorgeous blue orbs!" Might not have been sober at the time, then again I am just that type of asshole. PS it still ended well :)
In any event, enjoyed this. Please post more soon.
PPS, I have this story, Where There's Smoke... I could use some feedback, if you have the time to check it out.
Thanks again for sharing.
2Rachel032687Breaking the oldest of rules, in the newest of ways! Also, I have (in life) said, "You have gorgeous blue orbs!" Might not have been sober at the time, then again I am just that type of asshole. PS it still ended well :)
In any event, enjoyed this. Please post more soon.
PPS, I have this story, Where There's Smoke... I could use some feedback, if you have the time to check it out.
Thanks again for sharing.
11/4/2014 c2 FConnected
This is bloody fantastic mate, keep it up!
This is bloody fantastic mate, keep it up!
11/3/2014 c2 5Addison Cain
"Rainbow hair." I laughed so hard I spit out the salad I was eating. Love this! Your pointers are spot on.
5Addison Cain"Rainbow hair." I laughed so hard I spit out the salad I was eating. Love this! Your pointers are spot on.
11/3/2014 c2 Guest
Hahaha. A few days after reading the first chapter, I wondered if you would talk about gay/lesbian story, so it was cool that you addressed it. Waiting for the next chapter.
Hahaha. A few days after reading the first chapter, I wondered if you would talk about gay/lesbian story, so it was cool that you addressed it. Waiting for the next chapter.
11/3/2014 c2 2thegirlinthelibrary
Hey i read this and i just want say that the things here you said are in fact very true. I might even take a few tips from here of not trying to go the same cliche way people portray romances. I enjoy cliches at times but reading them again does make it sound a bit ridiculous. I like being girly and reading cliches but that sort of takes out the fun in reading...If you've already guessed what's going to happen ... then what was the point of reading it.? I'm an amateur writer as well and i like cliches but it wouldn't hurt to read (and also write) about other characters than Mary Sue. :)
2thegirlinthelibraryHey i read this and i just want say that the things here you said are in fact very true. I might even take a few tips from here of not trying to go the same cliche way people portray romances. I enjoy cliches at times but reading them again does make it sound a bit ridiculous. I like being girly and reading cliches but that sort of takes out the fun in reading...If you've already guessed what's going to happen ... then what was the point of reading it.? I'm an amateur writer as well and i like cliches but it wouldn't hurt to read (and also write) about other characters than Mary Sue. :)
10/19/2014 c1 Evan Sexyabs
Haha. This is so true. Every single story that my friend writes sounds exactly like these. Not even kidding. It gets annoying really fast.
Haha. This is so true. Every single story that my friend writes sounds exactly like these. Not even kidding. It gets annoying really fast.
10/19/2014 c1 Guest
Hehehehe. Your summaries... man. Made me giggle. And I agree with what you're saying... like my head was nodding along like old women watching The Maury show. "Mmhhmmm. Mmhhmmm. I knew it. I knew it." You might get a lot bashing, but im right over here. Hiding the corner behind you.
Hehehehe. Your summaries... man. Made me giggle. And I agree with what you're saying... like my head was nodding along like old women watching The Maury show. "Mmhhmmm. Mmhhmmm. I knew it. I knew it." You might get a lot bashing, but im right over here. Hiding the corner behind you.
10/19/2014 c1 1Terra-ds
I love how you describe Mary Sue A, Mary Sue B and Mary Sue C, XD it's hilarious. And yes, they do sound familiar, I've seen them on some (fan)fictions and anime, they can be annoying sometimes. Also there is one more type of Mary Sue, it's where basically every boy falls in love with her and she just acts either shy or denial.
1Terra-dsI love how you describe Mary Sue A, Mary Sue B and Mary Sue C, XD it's hilarious. And yes, they do sound familiar, I've seen them on some (fan)fictions and anime, they can be annoying sometimes. Also there is one more type of Mary Sue, it's where basically every boy falls in love with her and she just acts either shy or denial.