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11/5/2014 c2 14Shampoo Suicide
The dissolution of a friendship is an interesting topic, and one many readers will relate to. I like the premise of discussing what happened/is going wrong with a therapist throughout the work too, if that is the way you're going to progress with it. Your writing is pretty clear and simple, making it easy and enjoyable to read. I think this may have promise! Keep at it.
10/22/2014 c2 3Kalleh
Awesome story so far! I used to have a friend named Abby, and I had to cut that relationship as well.

One thing though, you wrote that Abby was "committed" to the hospital. I think you mean "admitted." :)
10/20/2014 c1 2Savannah Rousse
This is really good!

It's very vague but it catches your attention, and I am already dying to know what happened with Abby.

Update soon!

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