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11/4/2014 c1 6Darth Zannacross
I am sensing some, royal vibes here. Well, this story seems as zany as per usual with you Dany, we will see if there is method to the madness though, at least the cast seems ok so far from what we seen. Damien seems ok at least.
11/2/2014 c1 13360pages
An interesting premise, I wouldn't mind some more time establishing Damien and Dianne's relationship and personalities. Though I can see wanting to get to the action more quickly, I wouldn't mind a little more detail, just a tiny amount more here or there.

I do enjoy a hard opening though, and even though I wouldn't mind a little more context, that can come later.
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