
11/3/2014 c1 Guest
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11/3/2014 c1
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This was adorable! I'm glad you put Kieron in that kind of costume because I couldn't imagine him as anything else. I wish this did have some bearing over the plot because then we'd know Kieron survived :p Terry was precious in this chapter, too, with the way he kept saying "Kie-Kie". I liked this a lot!

This was adorable! I'm glad you put Kieron in that kind of costume because I couldn't imagine him as anything else. I wish this did have some bearing over the plot because then we'd know Kieron survived :p Terry was precious in this chapter, too, with the way he kept saying "Kie-Kie". I liked this a lot!
11/2/2014 c1
22Tenshi no Yami
Av-chan, Av-chan, Av-chan...thank you for the ficlet!
During the entire first half, I kept waiting and waiting. "Where's the costume?" then "OMG, they're shopping for costumes!" and finally "HE'S WEARING THE COSTUME!" I squealed, which made my roommate come into the kitchen then I laughed aloud at him fighting with the 5 yr old.
'Unca Kie! Unca Re!' If that isnt freaking cute then I don't know what is, ma'am! It was so freaking adorable!
Then there was the part when Terry got back. For some reason I thought they couldve been Rufus or maybe even Kieron for some odd reason. Then a second guy came in and i was like "Oh...oh dammit! Run!" But, you know, people are crazy.
Kie to the rescue!
And then of course you added the smexiness in at the end. When Kie started talking, I squealed, which left my roommate looking at me like I was completely nuts so...thanks for that, ma'am! But, yeah, didnt think something like that would ever come from his mouth O/3/O
Overall, this was a great story and thanks for writing it. You did a good job and who wouldve thought that Kie would have a soft spot for kids!
**favorited**
Thanks once more and Happy Halloween!
-Tenshi out!

Av-chan, Av-chan, Av-chan...thank you for the ficlet!
During the entire first half, I kept waiting and waiting. "Where's the costume?" then "OMG, they're shopping for costumes!" and finally "HE'S WEARING THE COSTUME!" I squealed, which made my roommate come into the kitchen then I laughed aloud at him fighting with the 5 yr old.
'Unca Kie! Unca Re!' If that isnt freaking cute then I don't know what is, ma'am! It was so freaking adorable!
Then there was the part when Terry got back. For some reason I thought they couldve been Rufus or maybe even Kieron for some odd reason. Then a second guy came in and i was like "Oh...oh dammit! Run!" But, you know, people are crazy.
Kie to the rescue!
And then of course you added the smexiness in at the end. When Kie started talking, I squealed, which left my roommate looking at me like I was completely nuts so...thanks for that, ma'am! But, yeah, didnt think something like that would ever come from his mouth O/3/O
Overall, this was a great story and thanks for writing it. You did a good job and who wouldve thought that Kie would have a soft spot for kids!
**favorited**
Thanks once more and Happy Halloween!
-Tenshi out!
11/2/2014 c1 Wavern16 'Inactive
Awwwww! I can totally picture Kieron dressing as that as well as having a soft spot for kids! LOL XD I really wanted to see that showdown between him and the five year old! Great work buddy! Amanda reminds me of my sissy because she's having another baby too, and Amanda reminds me of my neice! LOL, Harry Dresden huh? Awesome!
Awwwww! I can totally picture Kieron dressing as that as well as having a soft spot for kids! LOL XD I really wanted to see that showdown between him and the five year old! Great work buddy! Amanda reminds me of my sissy because she's having another baby too, and Amanda reminds me of my neice! LOL, Harry Dresden huh? Awesome!