for One and Only11/24/2014 c2 
2Terra Booma
So I like Boy, he should be interesting :P I'm hoping Jix can help her out a little.
2Terra BoomaSo I like Boy, he should be interesting :P I'm hoping Jix can help her out a little.
11/15/2014 c3 1Tigerboy101
Wow, very nice, VERY nice indeed! Loved it, and loved the battle scene!
I find it sad about what happend to Rovi. But I must say, the man fought well, and I credit him enough for that at least.
Good chapter, awesome plotline and characters, and can't wait to see another chapter of this!
1Tigerboy101Wow, very nice, VERY nice indeed! Loved it, and loved the battle scene!
I find it sad about what happend to Rovi. But I must say, the man fought well, and I credit him enough for that at least.
Good chapter, awesome plotline and characters, and can't wait to see another chapter of this!
11/14/2014 c2 Tigerboy101
inkfngr,
Very nice story, I must say. Very descriptive, very rich, and the atmosphere is just plain astonishing! I can't wait to hear more about this main character, and I am very interested to hear more about how the base is run!
Regardless of your perfection in spelling, grammar, and extreme genius in vocabulary, I do have a few requests in later chapters, or things that I personally would like to see. (Because they would make the story more believable, as you mentioned before in chap.1.)
- Don't forget to mention where those special zombies came from somehow, or maybe include later on how they came to be! In reality, I think anyone including you and me would know that zombies aren't actually smart enough to use humans as shields... or attract humans with fake speech. Don't get me wrong when I say this, I love the concept and the zombies themselves in general! But just like you said before, you gotta make sure it sounds believable. ;)
-Maybe you could also add details about the other characters, or clues to their pasts sense you are writing this in a journal kind of way. That would be cool to hear about.
Overall, very nice story, and loving the plot so far! Keep up the good work fellow author, I see great potential in your works!
Sincerely,
-Tigerboy101
inkfngr,
Very nice story, I must say. Very descriptive, very rich, and the atmosphere is just plain astonishing! I can't wait to hear more about this main character, and I am very interested to hear more about how the base is run!
Regardless of your perfection in spelling, grammar, and extreme genius in vocabulary, I do have a few requests in later chapters, or things that I personally would like to see. (Because they would make the story more believable, as you mentioned before in chap.1.)
- Don't forget to mention where those special zombies came from somehow, or maybe include later on how they came to be! In reality, I think anyone including you and me would know that zombies aren't actually smart enough to use humans as shields... or attract humans with fake speech. Don't get me wrong when I say this, I love the concept and the zombies themselves in general! But just like you said before, you gotta make sure it sounds believable. ;)
-Maybe you could also add details about the other characters, or clues to their pasts sense you are writing this in a journal kind of way. That would be cool to hear about.
Overall, very nice story, and loving the plot so far! Keep up the good work fellow author, I see great potential in your works!
Sincerely,
-Tigerboy101
11/9/2014 c1 2Terra Booma
Hey! I like it, interesting style! No story ideas :P But I can already think up characters!
2Terra BoomaHey! I like it, interesting style! No story ideas :P But I can already think up characters!