for Stargazer6/24/2015 c1 
2RadioactivePeppermint
Your writing is full of existential and grandiose visions of the universe. It reminds me of the Asylum Seeker/Refugee experiences in my country, in which many people describe themselves as alien and outside society. Your prose can be, at times, superfluous but otherwise rather beautiful. I really appreciate your delve into sci-fi.
2RadioactivePeppermintYour writing is full of existential and grandiose visions of the universe. It reminds me of the Asylum Seeker/Refugee experiences in my country, in which many people describe themselves as alien and outside society. Your prose can be, at times, superfluous but otherwise rather beautiful. I really appreciate your delve into sci-fi.
2/11/2015 c1 bz
Really liked this one. A very interesting and unique take on alien life, and an observation of the human race to an outsider. The ending was fantastic too. I always enjoy reading a story that incorporates the theme of the title. The word imagery you used did a great job of painting a clear picture of Haji in my mind. Good job bro.
Really liked this one. A very interesting and unique take on alien life, and an observation of the human race to an outsider. The ending was fantastic too. I always enjoy reading a story that incorporates the theme of the title. The word imagery you used did a great job of painting a clear picture of Haji in my mind. Good job bro.