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12/17/2015 c1 43zanybellecloudo
Not what I expected! But I felt Ciera told her story well and particularly the beginning which set a really vivid scene of what happened during her life which was important to the story to understand how she got to where she was. It was a dark and sordid world, but to her it felt like a place to belong which you portrayed very well.
11/22/2014 c1 5Ishotthealbatross
Ah, that's sad. It was a really good piece of writing though. I feel bad for Andrea, that she's accepted her lot in life, even though it's not that great. It would be really cool if this was a story, not a oneshot. I'd read it.

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