for Adventures Await12/3/2014 c1 
3Magreo
this is amazing i absolutely love this one with all of its story references and its theme of stories and adventures abroad. its written very well and i think its awesome keep em coming and ill keep reading cat :D
3Magreothis is amazing i absolutely love this one with all of its story references and its theme of stories and adventures abroad. its written very well and i think its awesome keep em coming and ill keep reading cat :D
11/26/2014 c1 8Kageyama
This is fantastic! I love all the references! The first lines help introduce the theme of your poem nicely, and you wrap it up well at the end. The only criticism I have was that you couldn't pull off all the rhymes perfectly, but even then I love this poem! Keep up the good work!
8KageyamaThis is fantastic! I love all the references! The first lines help introduce the theme of your poem nicely, and you wrap it up well at the end. The only criticism I have was that you couldn't pull off all the rhymes perfectly, but even then I love this poem! Keep up the good work!
11/25/2014 c1 182J.L.Rodriguez
This poem was definitely a lot of fun! I'm glad I clicked to read. Your flow, meter and rhyme were superbly done, as well as all of your literary references. They were introduced in the highest order, wonderful work. keep it up!
182J.L.RodriguezThis poem was definitely a lot of fun! I'm glad I clicked to read. Your flow, meter and rhyme were superbly done, as well as all of your literary references. They were introduced in the highest order, wonderful work. keep it up!