for Eternal Temptation3/8/2022 c5 CoConutella
Oh I’m so happy to hear that this series has been published! I always knew these were great tales and would totally become published works one day! I’m glad to see that the day came and they are out there now! A wonderful and nostalgic surprise for me
Oh I’m so happy to hear that this series has been published! I always knew these were great tales and would totally become published works one day! I’m glad to see that the day came and they are out there now! A wonderful and nostalgic surprise for me
8/26/2015 c4 Avid Reader
What a twist. Bordan wants a magical heir and he's decided Paige will be the mother? And poor Narayan, I thought he was going to collapse when he saw Paige holding Vaughn's hand. No doubt he'll come up with a plan to get her out of there before Bordan can change her mind.
What a twist. Bordan wants a magical heir and he's decided Paige will be the mother? And poor Narayan, I thought he was going to collapse when he saw Paige holding Vaughn's hand. No doubt he'll come up with a plan to get her out of there before Bordan can change her mind.
8/26/2015 c3 Avid Reader
So Paige is awake and not too happy about that bracelet. I'm liking Vaughn more and more but I'm liking Bordan a lot less. Now that Paige is awake and Narayan knows, I wonder how long it will take for him to get her out of there?
So Paige is awake and not too happy about that bracelet. I'm liking Vaughn more and more but I'm liking Bordan a lot less. Now that Paige is awake and Narayan knows, I wonder how long it will take for him to get her out of there?
8/26/2015 c2 Avid Reader
I wondered about Vaughn in the last book. He seemed like he was as snobbish and self centred as his father, but now I'm not so sure although he does seem to have a thing for the girls. Lucky girls ;)
I wondered about Vaughn in the last book. He seemed like he was as snobbish and self centred as his father, but now I'm not so sure although he does seem to have a thing for the girls. Lucky girls ;)
8/26/2015 c1 Avid Reader
Nice Start. I feel for Narayan, his best friend is held hostage and he seems to be going through some emotional turmoil over it. Looking forward to more.
Nice Start. I feel for Narayan, his best friend is held hostage and he seems to be going through some emotional turmoil over it. Looking forward to more.
7/25/2015 c27 Efra
Ahhhhhhh OMG I loved this! I can't wait to read it! Please update soon!
Ahhhhhhh OMG I loved this! I can't wait to read it! Please update soon!
7/25/2015 c27 
18Moonvibe
Whoa! Poor Nadia needs a grimoire fix in a bad way. Good thing Pan has been such an observant admirer. ;) Those two have pretty good chemistry, and being joined together by the EBA should only help that to develop. ;)
I really liked how Vaughn has humbled the ruling class in favor of the people and the kingdom they exist in. He will no doubt make a noble and revered ruler that his subjects will gladly be loyal to.
And the detail about the Lychans catching Morgan's scent in the secret bowels of the citadel was just brilliant. I loved that!
Even though this superbly crafted book has come to a close, you've left so much to be excited about in this series. I look forward to following these amazing characters along their fated paths to passionate love and grand adventure. :)
Thank you for all your efforts, and for creating such a fantastic and intricate series for story lovers to indulge in. These tales of yours never disappoint, and it's always a thrill to spend time in the wonderfully imaginative and highly detailed worlds you've created and populated with the most captivating of characters. The bar for supernatural fiction has clearly been raised. ;)
18MoonvibeWhoa! Poor Nadia needs a grimoire fix in a bad way. Good thing Pan has been such an observant admirer. ;) Those two have pretty good chemistry, and being joined together by the EBA should only help that to develop. ;)
I really liked how Vaughn has humbled the ruling class in favor of the people and the kingdom they exist in. He will no doubt make a noble and revered ruler that his subjects will gladly be loyal to.
And the detail about the Lychans catching Morgan's scent in the secret bowels of the citadel was just brilliant. I loved that!
Even though this superbly crafted book has come to a close, you've left so much to be excited about in this series. I look forward to following these amazing characters along their fated paths to passionate love and grand adventure. :)
Thank you for all your efforts, and for creating such a fantastic and intricate series for story lovers to indulge in. These tales of yours never disappoint, and it's always a thrill to spend time in the wonderfully imaginative and highly detailed worlds you've created and populated with the most captivating of characters. The bar for supernatural fiction has clearly been raised. ;)
7/19/2015 c26 Moonvibe
The bliss and contentment which Narayan and Paige have found in each other is a very rewarding, sensual conclusion to the trials they endured to reach Mate-hood. The steam was as scorching as ever, and the use of Paige's astral form made things very interesting. ;) And Narayan seems to be a natural at seduction and pleasure. Funny how one's Mate can bring out dormant sides. :)
I like the idea of Narayan assuming Paige's surname once they wed. Societal tradition often dictates otherwise, but with Narayan's lack of a surname they have a very good opportunity to buck outdated norms. ;) Afterall, a vampire and a hybrid Druid have no reason to abide by 'normal' customs.
It's been an amazing journey to reach this point in the relationship of these two characters. As each story in the series shifts the primary focus to differing characters, I find myself discovering more and more to love about this wonderfully unique cast. I don't think I could pick a core group to feature in any one story. They're all so captivating and interesting. :)
And I really liked Paige's description of Narayan. Lol. All I can picture is Jet Li's head on the Rock's body. Lol.
Terrific chapter full of love and lust between two souls now joined happily forever. Very nicely done with stimulating writing and heartfelt desires. This story is wrapping up wonderfully. :)
The bliss and contentment which Narayan and Paige have found in each other is a very rewarding, sensual conclusion to the trials they endured to reach Mate-hood. The steam was as scorching as ever, and the use of Paige's astral form made things very interesting. ;) And Narayan seems to be a natural at seduction and pleasure. Funny how one's Mate can bring out dormant sides. :)
I like the idea of Narayan assuming Paige's surname once they wed. Societal tradition often dictates otherwise, but with Narayan's lack of a surname they have a very good opportunity to buck outdated norms. ;) Afterall, a vampire and a hybrid Druid have no reason to abide by 'normal' customs.
It's been an amazing journey to reach this point in the relationship of these two characters. As each story in the series shifts the primary focus to differing characters, I find myself discovering more and more to love about this wonderfully unique cast. I don't think I could pick a core group to feature in any one story. They're all so captivating and interesting. :)
And I really liked Paige's description of Narayan. Lol. All I can picture is Jet Li's head on the Rock's body. Lol.
Terrific chapter full of love and lust between two souls now joined happily forever. Very nicely done with stimulating writing and heartfelt desires. This story is wrapping up wonderfully. :)
7/5/2015 c25 Moonvibe
What an amazing chapter!
The angelic revelations alone were enough to makes this one completely enthralling, and they have served to both enrichen the mythology you're crafting and make me very excited for what's to come in this series. :) And the almost gleeful way Ariel delivers these mind shattering and monumental prophecies is great. I can see a lot of dumbfounded expressions in her wake. Lol.
I particularly enjoyed the explanation of Paige's new form and abilities, as well as the very clever yet obvious reason as to why females of dual natured species lack the ability to shift. Also, I hope Paige's new found soul-tapping abilities find their way into future story lines. That's a very intriguing addition to her character.
The explanation behind the true nature of the cup's power, how it really effects someone, was nothing short of brilliantly creative too. Loved every morsel of that.
So going forward now feels a little different than in previous installments since the core group of characters now realize that grander events are on the horizon and they each have been destined to play specific roles in what's unfolding. I like how that dynamic gives them a sort of 'team of fate' feeling. They may not know exactly how the future events will develop, but at least now they know to stay aware and alert for the signs.
And it seems that in the near future Grace will have much more than just Tilly to play with. The family is about to run rampant with supernatural tykes. ;) The lives of these characters are changing in so many ways, both inwardly and outwardly. They are anything but static, one dimensional characters and as such the circumstances engulfing them feel more like actual experiences rather than masterfully crafted acts of fiction. ;)
The segment at the beginning about sharing secrets between sisters was filled with terrific banter and all too real reactions. Lol. As always you keep things grounded with very relatable dynamics and reactions. It's such fun at times to witness the natural reactions of these supernatural beings. Makes them seem almost human. ;)
Loved the ending scenes with Mates riding off on the backs of their dragons too. Fantastic imagery tinged with romantic vibes.
Can't wait to see what happens next, especially if there's more Marek ahead. ;)
Awesome chapter!
What an amazing chapter!
The angelic revelations alone were enough to makes this one completely enthralling, and they have served to both enrichen the mythology you're crafting and make me very excited for what's to come in this series. :) And the almost gleeful way Ariel delivers these mind shattering and monumental prophecies is great. I can see a lot of dumbfounded expressions in her wake. Lol.
I particularly enjoyed the explanation of Paige's new form and abilities, as well as the very clever yet obvious reason as to why females of dual natured species lack the ability to shift. Also, I hope Paige's new found soul-tapping abilities find their way into future story lines. That's a very intriguing addition to her character.
The explanation behind the true nature of the cup's power, how it really effects someone, was nothing short of brilliantly creative too. Loved every morsel of that.
So going forward now feels a little different than in previous installments since the core group of characters now realize that grander events are on the horizon and they each have been destined to play specific roles in what's unfolding. I like how that dynamic gives them a sort of 'team of fate' feeling. They may not know exactly how the future events will develop, but at least now they know to stay aware and alert for the signs.
And it seems that in the near future Grace will have much more than just Tilly to play with. The family is about to run rampant with supernatural tykes. ;) The lives of these characters are changing in so many ways, both inwardly and outwardly. They are anything but static, one dimensional characters and as such the circumstances engulfing them feel more like actual experiences rather than masterfully crafted acts of fiction. ;)
The segment at the beginning about sharing secrets between sisters was filled with terrific banter and all too real reactions. Lol. As always you keep things grounded with very relatable dynamics and reactions. It's such fun at times to witness the natural reactions of these supernatural beings. Makes them seem almost human. ;)
Loved the ending scenes with Mates riding off on the backs of their dragons too. Fantastic imagery tinged with romantic vibes.
Can't wait to see what happens next, especially if there's more Marek ahead. ;)
Awesome chapter!
6/28/2015 c24 8LorrahBear
Well. I just read all 24 chapters in one go. Obviously loved it. :)
There were a few typos scattered throughout, but beyond that, clearly it was worth the read.
You did a fantastic job of creating a world which drew me in. I felt like the main romance was a little forced at first, only in that I wished they had been happier to know it would be with each other, rather than with anyone else.
Love love loved it!
8LorrahBearWell. I just read all 24 chapters in one go. Obviously loved it. :)
There were a few typos scattered throughout, but beyond that, clearly it was worth the read.
You did a fantastic job of creating a world which drew me in. I felt like the main romance was a little forced at first, only in that I wished they had been happier to know it would be with each other, rather than with anyone else.
Love love loved it!
6/28/2015 c24 18Moonvibe
Another awesomely action-packed chapter!
I loved how Oliver's drastic state of health just suddenly flipped after he um, hurled his guts out. Lol. I really did think there was about to be a new Alpha in town though.
Teagan's suspended animation spell added some spectacular effects to the ongoing battle, which was depicted so cleverly through varying aspects which played out in this chapter. There was a real atmosphere of a monumental struggle between forces raging all around the characters, just like in the previous chapter. And I enjoyed every heart-pounding visual bit of it. :)
The bizarre exchange between Brin and Marcus was very intriguing too, especially the absorption of blood into her palms. That was both freaky and cool. ;)
And the final battle between Bordan and Vaughn did not disappoint! It was a brutal spectacle of power and rage, and I think you really made the most of their dragons during the fight. Using the mountain added some stunning visuals too that really helped paint the scope of a pivotal confrontation between too powerful and massive beasts. I really enjoyed Teagan's role in the final outcome too. Vaughn's resignation to sacrifice himself for the greater good was inspiring, but I'm thankful for his powerful friends too. ;) You've done a wonderful job of turning him from an arrogant heel into a noble, dutiful leader.
Raif displayed a very noble and wise side of his character when he conceded the fight to Vaughn, despite having every rage fueled reason to slay Bordan himself. And Vaughn ultimately revealed a merciful heart when deciding his father's fate, but I kinda expected what was going to happen when Brin laid her hands on him. So glad you snuck that little reminder about the negative side of her power into the earlier part of the chapter. ;) Bordan's demise was very fitting to the plot as well as to what he'd become in his later, deranged years though. A very well crafted and dramatic end that wrenched a few mixed feelings from the main cast.
All in all this was another thrilling chapter that had everything such an epic showdown should have. Just an intriguing and exciting conflict to the surprise ending. :) I loved it!
18MoonvibeAnother awesomely action-packed chapter!
I loved how Oliver's drastic state of health just suddenly flipped after he um, hurled his guts out. Lol. I really did think there was about to be a new Alpha in town though.
Teagan's suspended animation spell added some spectacular effects to the ongoing battle, which was depicted so cleverly through varying aspects which played out in this chapter. There was a real atmosphere of a monumental struggle between forces raging all around the characters, just like in the previous chapter. And I enjoyed every heart-pounding visual bit of it. :)
The bizarre exchange between Brin and Marcus was very intriguing too, especially the absorption of blood into her palms. That was both freaky and cool. ;)
And the final battle between Bordan and Vaughn did not disappoint! It was a brutal spectacle of power and rage, and I think you really made the most of their dragons during the fight. Using the mountain added some stunning visuals too that really helped paint the scope of a pivotal confrontation between too powerful and massive beasts. I really enjoyed Teagan's role in the final outcome too. Vaughn's resignation to sacrifice himself for the greater good was inspiring, but I'm thankful for his powerful friends too. ;) You've done a wonderful job of turning him from an arrogant heel into a noble, dutiful leader.
Raif displayed a very noble and wise side of his character when he conceded the fight to Vaughn, despite having every rage fueled reason to slay Bordan himself. And Vaughn ultimately revealed a merciful heart when deciding his father's fate, but I kinda expected what was going to happen when Brin laid her hands on him. So glad you snuck that little reminder about the negative side of her power into the earlier part of the chapter. ;) Bordan's demise was very fitting to the plot as well as to what he'd become in his later, deranged years though. A very well crafted and dramatic end that wrenched a few mixed feelings from the main cast.
All in all this was another thrilling chapter that had everything such an epic showdown should have. Just an intriguing and exciting conflict to the surprise ending. :) I loved it!
6/21/2015 c23 Moonvibe
What an exceptionally thrilling chapter! Just wow! Breathtaking!
The battle has developed quickly into an all-star show of force and skill, plus those dragons are impressively formidable. Alaric and Alex were real show stoppers. ;) The action sequences are so exciting and visual, and of course the banter between characters is just superb. I loved how Kaitlyn's mind was totally blown by Paige's frank admissions. Lol.
And speaking of Paige, her astral wolf was awesome! I did wince when it became a dragon treat though. Fantastic writing! So visual, and as always you balance the story so well with such brilliant strokes like the gruesome defeat of her astral wolf and Sebastian's heroic arrival.
Recalling the start of this chapter I really enjoyed Paige and Narayan's moment of awkwardness in front of Kendra. Lol. Cleverly revealing about Paige's changes too, with her more feral side revealing itself during arousing moments. ;)
Poor Raif is gonna have to rip somebody in half to vent all of his building anger and frustration. Maybe a few somebodies. Sure hope his dragon gets in on the action, soon. And speaking of hope, Oliver's fate seems to be in need of a good bit of it.
Perhaps Bordan's thirst for personal vendettas will keep his insane mind off the Thunderstone long enough to cause his downfall. Either way this battle has just started and it looks as if it's gonna be epic!
Another awesome chapter that was a true experience to read thanks to your amazing prowess with creative writing and masterful storytelling. I was enthralled from start to finish and can't wait for more! :)
And btw, I'm still with Alex on Jacob's injuries. He got exactly what he deserved. ;) Lol.
What an exceptionally thrilling chapter! Just wow! Breathtaking!
The battle has developed quickly into an all-star show of force and skill, plus those dragons are impressively formidable. Alaric and Alex were real show stoppers. ;) The action sequences are so exciting and visual, and of course the banter between characters is just superb. I loved how Kaitlyn's mind was totally blown by Paige's frank admissions. Lol.
And speaking of Paige, her astral wolf was awesome! I did wince when it became a dragon treat though. Fantastic writing! So visual, and as always you balance the story so well with such brilliant strokes like the gruesome defeat of her astral wolf and Sebastian's heroic arrival.
Recalling the start of this chapter I really enjoyed Paige and Narayan's moment of awkwardness in front of Kendra. Lol. Cleverly revealing about Paige's changes too, with her more feral side revealing itself during arousing moments. ;)
Poor Raif is gonna have to rip somebody in half to vent all of his building anger and frustration. Maybe a few somebodies. Sure hope his dragon gets in on the action, soon. And speaking of hope, Oliver's fate seems to be in need of a good bit of it.
Perhaps Bordan's thirst for personal vendettas will keep his insane mind off the Thunderstone long enough to cause his downfall. Either way this battle has just started and it looks as if it's gonna be epic!
Another awesome chapter that was a true experience to read thanks to your amazing prowess with creative writing and masterful storytelling. I was enthralled from start to finish and can't wait for more! :)
And btw, I'm still with Alex on Jacob's injuries. He got exactly what he deserved. ;) Lol.
6/14/2015 c22 Moonvibe
Without a doubt I feel this is the best all around chapter you have written to date. Every event in this chapter was not only riveting to the last moment, but just amazingly written with fantastic attention to visual details and very compelling character involvement. The banter throughout was just superb too, providing such entertaining flare and fun exchanges.
Raif reacted pretty much the way I expected. Talk about loosing one's cool. ;) I guess Kaitlyn just experienced a new side to her Mate, but she held her ground. That was a very dramatic closing to their heated exchange too. Bordan!
"That crazy bitch has caused more trouble than gonorrhoea." LOL!
The intricately crafted and sympathetic back story of Marek revealed after reuniting with his son was a very unexpected but highly intriguing look into his past. It revealed so much about himself and Morgan. The resentment she harbored for his lack of aging and the torment she made him endure speak volumes about her own wickedness and shallowness. Just brilliant storytelling!
And things like the characters with Mates relating to Talia's reluctance to help because of a fresh spat with her Mate was perfect! Talk about common ground. Lol. The brief nod to Pan being uncomfortable without Nicholas around was a clever reminder of their uncommonly close knit bond also.
Believe it or not, I thoroughly enjoyed the giant creepy spider crusade. Lol. Partly because I would have reacted and thought exactly the way Alex did. Plus it's always fun to see it happen to someone else, especially when you can relate so keenly. Lol! The realization that it was a jumping spider couldn't have been better timed or executed. That had me gasping with discovery and an 'Oh sh**!' response. Really, that entire segment was a hoot to experience but I'm sure glad it's over. Whew!
Truly a phenomenally written and incredibly immersive chapter. This whole series has been this way, but I really found myself utterly swept away in the events of this chapter. Perhaps because so much is coming to a head at this point, but there was never a dull moment or a lapse in just awesome storytelling with richly diverse characters. :)
Without a doubt I feel this is the best all around chapter you have written to date. Every event in this chapter was not only riveting to the last moment, but just amazingly written with fantastic attention to visual details and very compelling character involvement. The banter throughout was just superb too, providing such entertaining flare and fun exchanges.
Raif reacted pretty much the way I expected. Talk about loosing one's cool. ;) I guess Kaitlyn just experienced a new side to her Mate, but she held her ground. That was a very dramatic closing to their heated exchange too. Bordan!
"That crazy bitch has caused more trouble than gonorrhoea." LOL!
The intricately crafted and sympathetic back story of Marek revealed after reuniting with his son was a very unexpected but highly intriguing look into his past. It revealed so much about himself and Morgan. The resentment she harbored for his lack of aging and the torment she made him endure speak volumes about her own wickedness and shallowness. Just brilliant storytelling!
And things like the characters with Mates relating to Talia's reluctance to help because of a fresh spat with her Mate was perfect! Talk about common ground. Lol. The brief nod to Pan being uncomfortable without Nicholas around was a clever reminder of their uncommonly close knit bond also.
Believe it or not, I thoroughly enjoyed the giant creepy spider crusade. Lol. Partly because I would have reacted and thought exactly the way Alex did. Plus it's always fun to see it happen to someone else, especially when you can relate so keenly. Lol! The realization that it was a jumping spider couldn't have been better timed or executed. That had me gasping with discovery and an 'Oh sh**!' response. Really, that entire segment was a hoot to experience but I'm sure glad it's over. Whew!
Truly a phenomenally written and incredibly immersive chapter. This whole series has been this way, but I really found myself utterly swept away in the events of this chapter. Perhaps because so much is coming to a head at this point, but there was never a dull moment or a lapse in just awesome storytelling with richly diverse characters. :)
6/11/2015 c21 Efra
Update!
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6/7/2015 c21 Moonvibe
Wow, what a deeply felt and heart rending chapter. And I must say that the way this dilemma has played out for Paige and Narayan has been just masterfully orchestrated. Being one of two major arcs in this story, this ongoing plight has really proven to be a dramatic source of compelling storytelling on more than one occasion.
While Bordan's schemes and Vaughn's rebel uprising have fueled exciting events which are no doubt leading to widespread and large scale changes before all is said and done, the more isolated and intimate struggles and revelations between Narayan and Paige have given such heart and depth of soul to the core of this tale. And the possible conclusion of their journey, one way or another, is very well timed in the story in my opinion.
This chapter was a joyous, yet heart stopping cliff hanger. Brilliantly done and I can hardly wait for what happens next! :)
Wow, what a deeply felt and heart rending chapter. And I must say that the way this dilemma has played out for Paige and Narayan has been just masterfully orchestrated. Being one of two major arcs in this story, this ongoing plight has really proven to be a dramatic source of compelling storytelling on more than one occasion.
While Bordan's schemes and Vaughn's rebel uprising have fueled exciting events which are no doubt leading to widespread and large scale changes before all is said and done, the more isolated and intimate struggles and revelations between Narayan and Paige have given such heart and depth of soul to the core of this tale. And the possible conclusion of their journey, one way or another, is very well timed in the story in my opinion.
This chapter was a joyous, yet heart stopping cliff hanger. Brilliantly done and I can hardly wait for what happens next! :)