11/27/2014 c1 Absent Pulse
Gorgeous, vicious imagery. It read back to me beautifully. Irregular rhyme scheme and line length helped make the poem feel torn, sharp. Even a little grimy, with a hopeful edge.

I have got to see the show. Clearly, if it inspired you, I'll like it a lot.

Thank you so much for this. I only wish I were a decent critic for poetry.