for The Blacksmith's Bride5/21/2015 c19 Guest
I do absolutely love this story. I'm always excited to read more :)
I do absolutely love this story. I'm always excited to read more :)
5/17/2015 c1 arrin
nooo hal nooo you are smarter than that too not be blinded by your fury! anyway love the development, an increase in tension is always good for a story. hahaha ;D
nooo hal nooo you are smarter than that too not be blinded by your fury! anyway love the development, an increase in tension is always good for a story. hahaha ;D
5/14/2015 c18 
4Leasah
Oh god. I just hope she is able to make him go away somehow. I hope so much that Hal doesn't find them in a compromising position! Not that I don't trust her, but I might think that Roger is the worse.
It has been just one chapter, but I'm already missing the warmth between Hal and Joanna.
Thanks for the update. :)
4LeasahOh god. I just hope she is able to make him go away somehow. I hope so much that Hal doesn't find them in a compromising position! Not that I don't trust her, but I might think that Roger is the worse.
It has been just one chapter, but I'm already missing the warmth between Hal and Joanna.
Thanks for the update. :)
5/14/2015 c18 shinju asuka
Ugh... Roger... Hal and Joanna's good development was ruined by him! I imagine something bad would happen... Hope i'm wrong...
Ugh... Roger... Hal and Joanna's good development was ruined by him! I imagine something bad would happen... Hope i'm wrong...
5/13/2015 c18 Bookworm
I can't wait for her to let Hal hear the truth and hopefully hear her rip Rodger a new one?
I can't wait for her to let Hal hear the truth and hopefully hear her rip Rodger a new one?
5/13/2015 c18 WillowBloom
Stop leaving it on cliff hangers, i want to know more. Thank you for uploading today it was my first day of exams and they did not go well so this has made my day. I feel so sorry for Hal, and for Joanna. I can't wait to see how they work this out. Great writing by the way, you have such a lovely writing style.
Stop leaving it on cliff hangers, i want to know more. Thank you for uploading today it was my first day of exams and they did not go well so this has made my day. I feel so sorry for Hal, and for Joanna. I can't wait to see how they work this out. Great writing by the way, you have such a lovely writing style.
5/13/2015 c18 amelie
they are so frustrating lol
they are so frustrating lol
5/13/2015 c18 Elle Poko
Again I'm a little irked at Hal for his treatment of Joanna. I understand why he's feeling jealous, but that still doesn't mean he should direct his anger out on Joanna. Though, to be fair jealousy has a way of clouding your judgement. Again though, Joanna doesn't deserve him treating her so coldly when she's done nothing wrong.
I hope Roger doesn't hurt her anymore than he has since the poor girl has already been through enough of his crap.
Anyways, as always, great chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next.
Again I'm a little irked at Hal for his treatment of Joanna. I understand why he's feeling jealous, but that still doesn't mean he should direct his anger out on Joanna. Though, to be fair jealousy has a way of clouding your judgement. Again though, Joanna doesn't deserve him treating her so coldly when she's done nothing wrong.
I hope Roger doesn't hurt her anymore than he has since the poor girl has already been through enough of his crap.
Anyways, as always, great chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next.
5/12/2015 c17 WillowBloom
Wow i love this story it is my obsession at the moment i can seem to get enough. I cant wait to see how much roger will stir up in the next chapter, please update soon:)
Wow i love this story it is my obsession at the moment i can seem to get enough. I cant wait to see how much roger will stir up in the next chapter, please update soon:)
5/5/2015 c17 Leasah
OOooooooh, I was waiting for this day to come. I am just very glad that their marriage has reached a point of love before it, though. I can't wait to see how this will affect them.
Their passion is beautiful. I'm so happy for them. I loved this.
Also, I'm curious about Hal's secret.
Thanks for the update. It was an amazing one!
OOooooooh, I was waiting for this day to come. I am just very glad that their marriage has reached a point of love before it, though. I can't wait to see how this will affect them.
Their passion is beautiful. I'm so happy for them. I loved this.
Also, I'm curious about Hal's secret.
Thanks for the update. It was an amazing one!
5/5/2015 c17 amelie
is the secret roger! or something bigger
is the secret roger! or something bigger
5/5/2015 c17 skye real
Oh what a cliffy. ... I think Hal has established his relationship with his wife to feel threatened with Roger's appearance. Although he might have another motive for coning by and I hope it's not to rekindle anything with Joanna. I love Hal snd Joanna's marital development and I hope they'll be popping them babies soon
Oh what a cliffy. ... I think Hal has established his relationship with his wife to feel threatened with Roger's appearance. Although he might have another motive for coning by and I hope it's not to rekindle anything with Joanna. I love Hal snd Joanna's marital development and I hope they'll be popping them babies soon
5/4/2015 c17 Elle Poko
Just when everything was going well, Roger appears to shake things up, much to my liking. I had kind of been wondering when he'd make another appearance and what Joanna's reaction might be to seeing him again. Though I am curious, why is he back? You've already got me looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Just when everything was going well, Roger appears to shake things up, much to my liking. I had kind of been wondering when he'd make another appearance and what Joanna's reaction might be to seeing him again. Though I am curious, why is he back? You've already got me looking forward to the next chapter. :)