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12/14/2014 c1 The Rune-Keeper
The story is great overall, I enjoyed the read.
My only qualm with it is that you are a bit too wordy at times, and that impedes the flow at times. If the descriptions were dialed back a bit, your imagery would be perfect.
Your tone and pacing is flawless in my opinion.
12/8/2014 c1 Morbid Irony
I am very much intrigued by this story and would love for it to continue. In all honesty, I think it's a bit wordy in places, but I absolutely love the imagery you conjure up with those words. This is a refreshing piece of work after some of the other poorly thought out stories I've read on this site recently. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.

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