12/8/2014 c1 1LuluLou
It's not boring, I really want to read the rest! Curious though! Is Kaitlynn schizophrenic? Keep it up! You write pretty neatly and it sounds like a nice story.
Although, there's this typo that's driving me crazy (Yes, I can be a Grammar Freak, sorry about that) but since you asked, you wrote 'then' instead of 'than' when Lucy was telling Evan that she's just a year younger than him.
Waiting for an update! _
It's not boring, I really want to read the rest! Curious though! Is Kaitlynn schizophrenic? Keep it up! You write pretty neatly and it sounds like a nice story.
Although, there's this typo that's driving me crazy (Yes, I can be a Grammar Freak, sorry about that) but since you asked, you wrote 'then' instead of 'than' when Lucy was telling Evan that she's just a year younger than him.
Waiting for an update! _