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12/8/2014 c1 1LuluLou
It's not boring, I really want to read the rest! Curious though! Is Kaitlynn schizophrenic? Keep it up! You write pretty neatly and it sounds like a nice story.

Although, there's this typo that's driving me crazy (Yes, I can be a Grammar Freak, sorry about that) but since you asked, you wrote 'then' instead of 'than' when Lucy was telling Evan that she's just a year younger than him.

Waiting for an update! _
12/5/2014 c1 5Tears of Pitch
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