for Tesac Rock3/28/2015 c7 Guest
This is really good :)
This is really good :)
3/27/2015 c7 EmilytheAxolotl
Thank you thank you thank you! I was just about to ask again how things were going lol.
Also just so you know, I think there is a repeat of a portion of the chapter, maybe an editing mistake?
Anyway, I am very intrigued to see where this goes next (raiders? garth and oliver having more fights? Or maybe not?). Also I hope for another chapter from Garth's point of view soon... I liked reading his naughty thoughts about Oliver ;)
Thank you thank you thank you! I was just about to ask again how things were going lol.
Also just so you know, I think there is a repeat of a portion of the chapter, maybe an editing mistake?
Anyway, I am very intrigued to see where this goes next (raiders? garth and oliver having more fights? Or maybe not?). Also I hope for another chapter from Garth's point of view soon... I liked reading his naughty thoughts about Oliver ;)
2/3/2015 c6 Fenrirsboy
Thank you thank you thank you! Loved reading how they react to each other's tiniest expression or mood changes! Also the sexy times were hot ;)
Thank you thank you thank you! Loved reading how they react to each other's tiniest expression or mood changes! Also the sexy times were hot ;)
2/3/2015 c6 Choco84
Love your story, I always get so excited when I see it been updated. Tesac Rock is so original, I love its honestly about humans desire for companionship. I can't wait for Oliver's reaction to Garth's home and to see how they are gonna work out living together in such isolation.
Love your story, I always get so excited when I see it been updated. Tesac Rock is so original, I love its honestly about humans desire for companionship. I can't wait for Oliver's reaction to Garth's home and to see how they are gonna work out living together in such isolation.
2/2/2015 c6 Guest
I really wonder what Oliver's perspective was on all of this! Great writing!
I really wonder what Oliver's perspective was on all of this! Great writing!
2/2/2015 c6 Roger Jaminson
The longing for the next chapter has broken a new world record. What was Oliver thinking when he put the terms and push the boundaries? This is not rhetoric. Yay for Garth too! He finally has someone to cuddle with.
Also when Oliver kept pouting, and Garth said, "tiny little smack", gosh! It was just like a couple moment right there.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
The longing for the next chapter has broken a new world record. What was Oliver thinking when he put the terms and push the boundaries? This is not rhetoric. Yay for Garth too! He finally has someone to cuddle with.
Also when Oliver kept pouting, and Garth said, "tiny little smack", gosh! It was just like a couple moment right there.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
2/1/2015 c6 Guest
Wish I could write a more useful review but in terrible at these. Just wanted to let you know that you are an amazing writer and that I hope to see more of this story. Thank you for sharing this with us. The isolation on this planet and the desperation of the inhabitants struck a chord with me.
Wish I could write a more useful review but in terrible at these. Just wanted to let you know that you are an amazing writer and that I hope to see more of this story. Thank you for sharing this with us. The isolation on this planet and the desperation of the inhabitants struck a chord with me.
1/18/2015 c5 Fenrirsboy
Read this over at , the wait is killing me! i love this story, love your writing, read your other story too.
Thanks for your work!
Read this over at , the wait is killing me! i love this story, love your writing, read your other story too.
Thanks for your work!
1/9/2015 c5 Guest
Oliver is a lot more confident and considered than i'd realized! If Garth isn't careful I reckon Oliver could get him wound round his little finger!
Oliver is a lot more confident and considered than i'd realized! If Garth isn't careful I reckon Oliver could get him wound round his little finger!
1/9/2015 c5 Roger Jaminson
Aaaawwww. I love that ending! Seeing this through Oliver's piont of view was refreshing. Not that Garth's was getting boring. It's just like switching from strawberry scented perfume to mango. Garth is so shy and nervous that I couldn't watch the awkwardness (I know we're reading, but for me, there's a TV on ma brain with Oliver and Garth as the main actors). There was that one line that confused me. Never mind. I reread just now and he was talking about Andrew, not Oliver. Gosh. This slow pace is killing me, but I love it like that.
Aaaawwww. I love that ending! Seeing this through Oliver's piont of view was refreshing. Not that Garth's was getting boring. It's just like switching from strawberry scented perfume to mango. Garth is so shy and nervous that I couldn't watch the awkwardness (I know we're reading, but for me, there's a TV on ma brain with Oliver and Garth as the main actors). There was that one line that confused me. Never mind. I reread just now and he was talking about Andrew, not Oliver. Gosh. This slow pace is killing me, but I love it like that.
1/6/2015 c4 Poor Oliver
I can't wait for the next chapter to get Oliver's thoughts! The poor guy, Garth seemed so kind to him last time, and now he's basically showing himself to be deceptive. I totally get Garth's point of view, but I'm sure Oliver doesn't! Love this fic!
I can't wait for the next chapter to get Oliver's thoughts! The poor guy, Garth seemed so kind to him last time, and now he's basically showing himself to be deceptive. I totally get Garth's point of view, but I'm sure Oliver doesn't! Love this fic!
1/6/2015 c4 Guest
Woah, my heart was thudding so hard all the way through this. Best chapter yet, and I think the best is still to come!
Woah, my heart was thudding so hard all the way through this. Best chapter yet, and I think the best is still to come!
1/5/2015 c4 Roger Jaminson
Oh! It's hard to hate him for screwing Oliver over. Oliver such a sweet kid too. I want to them to fight just so they can make up and be together, but I'm scared that this might take one of them realistic turns and end with Oliver shipped off to the mines, remembering his bittersweet moments with Garth, and Garth being alone again with the misery of having lost someone. I will seriously cry.
Oh! It's hard to hate him for screwing Oliver over. Oliver such a sweet kid too. I want to them to fight just so they can make up and be together, but I'm scared that this might take one of them realistic turns and end with Oliver shipped off to the mines, remembering his bittersweet moments with Garth, and Garth being alone again with the misery of having lost someone. I will seriously cry.
12/13/2014 c3 InsanityAndBeyond
oof this is such an intersting story already.
I can already predict the oodles of angst, as long as there's a satisfying ending I'm here for the ride!
There's so many morality issues here its crazy. Garth's reasoning with himself he keeps doing throughout to convince himself he's made the right decision is very interesting.
hmm, I can't figure out if Garths a good man. He's clearly doing a bad thing but desperation does these things. He seems relatable sometimes but then is cruel in his thoughts about Oliver and what he did was sly. Poor Oliver.
I figure Garth is kind of going to continue this charade until they really start to have feelings for each other, and then confesses in guilt, and then a blow up happens Oliver runs away, then comes back voluntarily a while later. Orr I could be completely of the mark.
I'm excited for this story, the writings great, the plots sound and it's already stirring up a lot of emotion.
oof this is such an intersting story already.
I can already predict the oodles of angst, as long as there's a satisfying ending I'm here for the ride!
There's so many morality issues here its crazy. Garth's reasoning with himself he keeps doing throughout to convince himself he's made the right decision is very interesting.
hmm, I can't figure out if Garths a good man. He's clearly doing a bad thing but desperation does these things. He seems relatable sometimes but then is cruel in his thoughts about Oliver and what he did was sly. Poor Oliver.
I figure Garth is kind of going to continue this charade until they really start to have feelings for each other, and then confesses in guilt, and then a blow up happens Oliver runs away, then comes back voluntarily a while later. Orr I could be completely of the mark.
I'm excited for this story, the writings great, the plots sound and it's already stirring up a lot of emotion.