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12/11/2014 c1 laurenlovexox
Love it! Was very fun to read. Do continue.
12/11/2014 c1 eliza
id like to read more! good job!
12/10/2014 c1 1endlesslyrestless
Heyy there. c:

Just wanted to point out correct tagging for dialogue: "If the tag describes the dialogue, it should be a comma before the quotation mark instead of a period," she said. "If the following doesn't describe the dialogue, then it should be a period." She laughed.

Like that. Er the example/paragraph sucks but you get my point right? So for example, it should be:

"...," she simpered. And: "...," she inquired.

Aside from that, this story seems pretty promising. Looking forward to more.

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