for Icarus Rising2/25 c1 adamfranklin.uu
The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. I think it would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece. I look forward to hearing more of your stories.
Warm regards,
Addy
The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. I think it would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece. I look forward to hearing more of your stories.
Warm regards,
Addy
2/21 c1 emmanoah1969
Your story is amazing, and your characters truly well-written. I'm really excited to transform your idea into a comic! Let's get in touch; my contact information is below.
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Your story is amazing, and your characters truly well-written. I'm really excited to transform your idea into a comic! Let's get in touch; my contact information is below.
Contact Details:
Email: emmanoah1969 at gmail dot com
Emmanoah333 on Discord
5/24/2015 c1 
8theBatmanisShakakah
Ahhhhhhh! I loved this! I loved your world building, the descriptions were so beautifully detailed and illustrative. Your characters were in depth and I loved both of them - even the girl and I'm usually indifferent to the girl. I loved the world you made and the people you described. It was only 9,000 words yet every single sentence was powerful and to the point. Definitely one of my favourites :)
8theBatmanisShakakahAhhhhhhh! I loved this! I loved your world building, the descriptions were so beautifully detailed and illustrative. Your characters were in depth and I loved both of them - even the girl and I'm usually indifferent to the girl. I loved the world you made and the people you described. It was only 9,000 words yet every single sentence was powerful and to the point. Definitely one of my favourites :)
12/27/2014 c1 3fellintothemoon
Rosie, my darling girl, you've done it again. I've already read this of course, but I just need to leave a review to say how great this turned out. I can't believe you created an entire universe like this for your sc entry. I mean, I really admire the work you put into this.
3fellintothemoonRosie, my darling girl, you've done it again. I've already read this of course, but I just need to leave a review to say how great this turned out. I can't believe you created an entire universe like this for your sc entry. I mean, I really admire the work you put into this.
12/23/2014 c1 75AlysonSerenaStone
I liked it. This story had a lot things crammed into it, but you did try to make it as developed as possible for a one shot. I think this could be expanded into a full length story.
75AlysonSerenaStoneI liked it. This story had a lot things crammed into it, but you did try to make it as developed as possible for a one shot. I think this could be expanded into a full length story.
12/22/2014 c1 Julietish
Oh, my goodness, Rosie. You went and created an entire universe, set this one-shot in it, so I certainly hope you are thinking of revisiting it! What really stuck out to me the entire time was that you thoroughly knew the business of this otherly world. The concept of resistance, Guardians, hellwolves-they are all things I wanted to learn more about so you are completely and utterly required to write something else set in this world. The descriptions of Allirah were so, so beautiful and enchanting. You let the one-shot end at just the right moment with just the right emotions. There’s one small typo I caught in the line “You can’t put any wait on your leg…”, ‘wait’ should be ‘weight’. One of my favorite parts from reading submissions is stumbling across the prompt, and I loved how adventurous & happy the scene of the prompt was. Your one-shot was absolutely incredible, so thank you for participating so much! And congratulations-this one is the winner for this round!
Oh, my goodness, Rosie. You went and created an entire universe, set this one-shot in it, so I certainly hope you are thinking of revisiting it! What really stuck out to me the entire time was that you thoroughly knew the business of this otherly world. The concept of resistance, Guardians, hellwolves-they are all things I wanted to learn more about so you are completely and utterly required to write something else set in this world. The descriptions of Allirah were so, so beautiful and enchanting. You let the one-shot end at just the right moment with just the right emotions. There’s one small typo I caught in the line “You can’t put any wait on your leg…”, ‘wait’ should be ‘weight’. One of my favorite parts from reading submissions is stumbling across the prompt, and I loved how adventurous & happy the scene of the prompt was. Your one-shot was absolutely incredible, so thank you for participating so much! And congratulations-this one is the winner for this round!
12/19/2014 c1 15thenifoundfivedollars
This is so flippin' awesome, girl! I love it. It's one of those oneshots I was eager to gobble up in one sitting, but as I was reading a part of me was wishing it could be a longer, multi-chapter story. It's definitely lengthy, but even though it wasn't 'full length' it had enough detail for me to get a good handle on the setting and enough development for me to grow to enjoy the characters.
While I Love Tate and Alli and their romance, I was most intrigued by the universe you crafted. Brilliant! Rosie dear, you're amazing and I look forward to reading more by you SOON. :D
15thenifoundfivedollarsThis is so flippin' awesome, girl! I love it. It's one of those oneshots I was eager to gobble up in one sitting, but as I was reading a part of me was wishing it could be a longer, multi-chapter story. It's definitely lengthy, but even though it wasn't 'full length' it had enough detail for me to get a good handle on the setting and enough development for me to grow to enjoy the characters.
While I Love Tate and Alli and their romance, I was most intrigued by the universe you crafted. Brilliant! Rosie dear, you're amazing and I look forward to reading more by you SOON. :D
12/16/2014 c1 CharlyB
I love your super-long stories! Thanks for posting; I enjoyed the mini-universe you created.
I love your super-long stories! Thanks for posting; I enjoyed the mini-universe you created.
12/15/2014 c1 bluebells
Simply AMAZING! Love everything about it.
Simply AMAZING! Love everything about it.