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1/16/2015 c1 378my.life.is.over
I love this poem. It's imagery is there, and it's wonderful. I want to know more. I want to know why this young boy was stuck in the dark. I think it's good, when a piece of poetry, makes you want to know why. Why things were this way. Why things happened to him. Very good.
1/8/2015 c1 13360pages
I never actually reviewed a poem, and I legit have no way of going about even reviewing it. It is a nice poem. I don't think we need to know he boy's age. Other than that, I liked it. Nothing too long, just something short an to the point.
1/2/2015 c1 12Trade Winds
"The stars exhale"- what a gorgeous phrase, and what an interesting mental image it conjures. I have never heard that description before, I quite like it.
12/15/2014 c1 Guest
So pretty Apple. Q.Q

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12/15/2014 c1 6J.A. Cadelina
Wow. Nice!
12/14/2014 c1 2Echoed Song
Such amazing poetry! Short but sweet.
12/14/2014 c1 26cassi crysta
Very uplifting

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