for High Conversations on Cosmic Inflation5/3/2016 c47 
1HideAndGoSeek
Where did you go? I just realized I never got another fix of this story and it was JUST about to get to some sexy time! I need to read more! Come back!
1HideAndGoSeekWhere did you go? I just realized I never got another fix of this story and it was JUST about to get to some sexy time! I need to read more! Come back!
4/22/2016 c46 InsanityAndBeyond
I kinda want to write that I'm missing this story, but dont want you to feel pressured to update if you're busy.
So just a low pressure pop in to remind you this story's awesome.
I kinda want to write that I'm missing this story, but dont want you to feel pressured to update if you're busy.
So just a low pressure pop in to remind you this story's awesome.
4/12/2016 c45 sectumsempra
wow ive had this on a list of books to read on here and im so glad i finally did. amazing amazing story and characters. i cant get enough of them :) :) ) :)
wow ive had this on a list of books to read on here and im so glad i finally did. amazing amazing story and characters. i cant get enough of them :) :) ) :)
4/1/2016 c47 Guest
ive already commented once but... withdrawals!
ive already commented once but... withdrawals!
3/23/2016 c47 Guest
this is so good cant wait for more
this is so good cant wait for more
3/6/2016 c47 jules268
loveing this, cant wait for more.
loveing this, cant wait for more.
2/28/2016 c47 Guest
miss this story, I wonder what happens next.
miss this story, I wonder what happens next.
2/19/2016 c47 InsanityAndBeyond
arghhh I feel so bad I haven't reviewed in so long when I'm loving this tory as always. And so much has happened I can't even begin to fit it all in! Maybe I'll go back and review chapter by chapter but I don't know if that'll be annoying for you.
I don't know how to sum up all that's been happening except to say the story is wonderful as always, and that's not needless or empty praise, you pack so much in, your characters have endless depth, and the way Braden started with so many flaws and so many insecurities etc, but has slowly and naturally progressed in his confidence, righting his wrong chracteristics and/or changing his perceptions to more postitive ones, eg body confidence, his dad etc etc , is done so smoothly, so realistically, but it's still done and that's amazing. Your awareness of your characters is amazing.
And not just your main characters, your side characters have side plots etc that I really like. Rnadom things to mention : really liked the hsort but impactful thing with Savannah/andrea etc. When both Braden and Jace kinda dismissed Savannah ata the beginning as annoying etc, I felt a bit bad for her, but that was it because this is your story, and most authors use the main characters to shape the view of the side characters from the offset, eg even though I felt braden was harsh on her, since Jace was too, I figured ok, this si the view of Savannah we're mean tto have. But then no, you instead showed us, through Braden's shifting perspective, an alternate view, she's sweet, she has to deal with a drunk husband etc, etc. I'm rambling, but the way your protagonists viewpoint subtly shifts to show us his mental progression, and also helps us too at the same time get a clearer picture, is so rare in stories, and it's quite fascinating. Another example I think i may have already mentioned was the whole braden uncle cheating thing. That was Bradens views, but their were tiny hints that suggested otherwise, and then it turned out to be false too. im rambling but i just love it.
really like we've gotten a clearer picture of jaces boyfriends bit by bit over time, more realistic and just cooler.
and it keeps making me laugh how these two may be tiptoeing around stuff for a while, and then boom, theres a drunk night, eg the moonshine concert, and the fourth of july party, and now this one, wehre they get a hundred things sorted out in one night. But its still done realistically.
rambling but extension of the side character thing is this whole phil thing. there was always a sligth sense of unease at his drunkeness but the readers just accept it since jace does, thats how we're meant to see it in a way, but nope, braden stands up for him, which again is great progression, and its really cool. and good because jace was missing a few flaws.
they seem to have done the opening presents thing, or maybe we find out later what braden was telling andrea he'd need help for in the hospital, which seemed to be about this.
looking forward to braden's dad thing, jaces real mountain birthday/ jaces acceptance/rejection of his school/album etc etc and /or any other cool things you may or may not have coming up.
Im totalllllly in denail about your update son this story ending. IT SHALL LIVE FOREVER.
seriously though dude, oneshots...
also also I have no IDEA how you're getting through (med school) if I'm remembering correctly? if im not excuse me. AND writing this, so impressive. respect.
arghhh I feel so bad I haven't reviewed in so long when I'm loving this tory as always. And so much has happened I can't even begin to fit it all in! Maybe I'll go back and review chapter by chapter but I don't know if that'll be annoying for you.
I don't know how to sum up all that's been happening except to say the story is wonderful as always, and that's not needless or empty praise, you pack so much in, your characters have endless depth, and the way Braden started with so many flaws and so many insecurities etc, but has slowly and naturally progressed in his confidence, righting his wrong chracteristics and/or changing his perceptions to more postitive ones, eg body confidence, his dad etc etc , is done so smoothly, so realistically, but it's still done and that's amazing. Your awareness of your characters is amazing.
And not just your main characters, your side characters have side plots etc that I really like. Rnadom things to mention : really liked the hsort but impactful thing with Savannah/andrea etc. When both Braden and Jace kinda dismissed Savannah ata the beginning as annoying etc, I felt a bit bad for her, but that was it because this is your story, and most authors use the main characters to shape the view of the side characters from the offset, eg even though I felt braden was harsh on her, since Jace was too, I figured ok, this si the view of Savannah we're mean tto have. But then no, you instead showed us, through Braden's shifting perspective, an alternate view, she's sweet, she has to deal with a drunk husband etc, etc. I'm rambling, but the way your protagonists viewpoint subtly shifts to show us his mental progression, and also helps us too at the same time get a clearer picture, is so rare in stories, and it's quite fascinating. Another example I think i may have already mentioned was the whole braden uncle cheating thing. That was Bradens views, but their were tiny hints that suggested otherwise, and then it turned out to be false too. im rambling but i just love it.
really like we've gotten a clearer picture of jaces boyfriends bit by bit over time, more realistic and just cooler.
and it keeps making me laugh how these two may be tiptoeing around stuff for a while, and then boom, theres a drunk night, eg the moonshine concert, and the fourth of july party, and now this one, wehre they get a hundred things sorted out in one night. But its still done realistically.
rambling but extension of the side character thing is this whole phil thing. there was always a sligth sense of unease at his drunkeness but the readers just accept it since jace does, thats how we're meant to see it in a way, but nope, braden stands up for him, which again is great progression, and its really cool. and good because jace was missing a few flaws.
they seem to have done the opening presents thing, or maybe we find out later what braden was telling andrea he'd need help for in the hospital, which seemed to be about this.
looking forward to braden's dad thing, jaces real mountain birthday/ jaces acceptance/rejection of his school/album etc etc and /or any other cool things you may or may not have coming up.
Im totalllllly in denail about your update son this story ending. IT SHALL LIVE FOREVER.
seriously though dude, oneshots...
also also I have no IDEA how you're getting through (med school) if I'm remembering correctly? if im not excuse me. AND writing this, so impressive. respect.
1/28/2016 c47 2Lorna Freeman
Ohhhhh my Gawwwwd. I'm loving this so much! But seriously woman, you are filling my mind with such a high standards of men that only Jase can fulfil! I need him! And please tell me that the next chappie will finally have the frickle frackle? Haha! Jeez, I'm such a pervert XD
2Lorna FreemanOhhhhh my Gawwwwd. I'm loving this so much! But seriously woman, you are filling my mind with such a high standards of men that only Jase can fulfil! I need him! And please tell me that the next chappie will finally have the frickle frackle? Haha! Jeez, I'm such a pervert XD
1/26/2016 c47 Luna L
I let out THE most unattractive sound ever when I saw there was a new chapter!
This chapter was so damn good. My cheeks hurt from smiling so much!
When Braden brought up the whole day dream thing, I got worried that maybe Jase would be like, "I don't want kids" or something but he was just sooo fucking sweet and cute and it made me so happy to hear them talk about that even though I know they're not about to get married and have kids right now, but still...that was fucking cute as hell. I think they'd be GREAT parents!
And I love how they take each other's worries seriously and don't try and dismiss anything the other says. They have actual conversations about things and talk it out and that's just awesome. I think communication is the foundation of a strong, healthy relationship. I love, love LOVE these two so much I wanna hug and squish them!
Thank you again for another excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next!
I let out THE most unattractive sound ever when I saw there was a new chapter!
This chapter was so damn good. My cheeks hurt from smiling so much!
When Braden brought up the whole day dream thing, I got worried that maybe Jase would be like, "I don't want kids" or something but he was just sooo fucking sweet and cute and it made me so happy to hear them talk about that even though I know they're not about to get married and have kids right now, but still...that was fucking cute as hell. I think they'd be GREAT parents!
And I love how they take each other's worries seriously and don't try and dismiss anything the other says. They have actual conversations about things and talk it out and that's just awesome. I think communication is the foundation of a strong, healthy relationship. I love, love LOVE these two so much I wanna hug and squish them!
Thank you again for another excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next!
1/27/2016 c47 3Fryvi
Hmm, I'm kind of starting to feel like the party has been going on for a long time, though at the same time I have liked the things that have happened.
The writing hasn't felt dragged out either, and I liked this chapter too, so I don't know, maybe I'm just impatient for them to be alone at the end x)
3FryviHmm, I'm kind of starting to feel like the party has been going on for a long time, though at the same time I have liked the things that have happened.
The writing hasn't felt dragged out either, and I liked this chapter too, so I don't know, maybe I'm just impatient for them to be alone at the end x)
1/26/2016 c47 chibikodo
Arg way to ruin everything Phil. Especially that tender moment when Braden spilled his heart out to Jase. Of course Jase would hear about Braden standing up to Scott. Damian is a rascal. ;)
I can't wait to see how the double date with Damian goes.
Arg way to ruin everything Phil. Especially that tender moment when Braden spilled his heart out to Jase. Of course Jase would hear about Braden standing up to Scott. Damian is a rascal. ;)
I can't wait to see how the double date with Damian goes.
1/10/2016 c46 Me
Amazing. I want to know whats up with Phil. Loved that part. Absolutely loved it. Its like you are weaving a web of gold. Everything seems so thought out and planned. We havr been reading about Phil's alcoholic tendencies for so long and never really cared but now you have brought it into the limelight so nicely.
Now weird request up ahead...
Um I really really really want to see an angry Jase. That would be so hot. It would be even hotter if he were angry on Braden's behalf. Cliche maybe but a seriously Jase angry would be Jase hot. ;_; Okay. Never stop writing
Amazing. I want to know whats up with Phil. Loved that part. Absolutely loved it. Its like you are weaving a web of gold. Everything seems so thought out and planned. We havr been reading about Phil's alcoholic tendencies for so long and never really cared but now you have brought it into the limelight so nicely.
Now weird request up ahead...
Um I really really really want to see an angry Jase. That would be so hot. It would be even hotter if he were angry on Braden's behalf. Cliche maybe but a seriously Jase angry would be Jase hot. ;_; Okay. Never stop writing
1/8/2016 c46 iwanttodeletethiswtf
You apologized for an "needlessly long" chapter, but please don't. You've really made me fall in love with these characters. They feel so real, and they're so easy to relate to. It's amazing this little mini world you've created. Reading about Braden making friends with Damian and handling the Scott situation like a fucking saint, I feel as though I'm right there. I feel ridiculously proud of Braden, with all of the incredible progress he's made as a person and in his relationship with Jase. I haven't reviewed every chapter because I'm usually behind since I don't check my email regularly, but I have this saved in my bookmarks so I just regularly come looking for it and get swept along in all the feels. I get so choked up at the end of every chapter, like there's a knot in my throat, and I may have honest to God cried a few times. The way that Braden is dealing with his life and with his relationships with people - Shiloh, his brother, his uncle, Jase's friends - it's inspirational. I'm amazed at how well you've brought this all together. You're slowly but surely tying up the loose ends like a bow on the wonderful gift of a story this is. I'll be lost when this ends, but I'll be coming back to read it over and over again long after you post the final chapter.
You apologized for an "needlessly long" chapter, but please don't. You've really made me fall in love with these characters. They feel so real, and they're so easy to relate to. It's amazing this little mini world you've created. Reading about Braden making friends with Damian and handling the Scott situation like a fucking saint, I feel as though I'm right there. I feel ridiculously proud of Braden, with all of the incredible progress he's made as a person and in his relationship with Jase. I haven't reviewed every chapter because I'm usually behind since I don't check my email regularly, but I have this saved in my bookmarks so I just regularly come looking for it and get swept along in all the feels. I get so choked up at the end of every chapter, like there's a knot in my throat, and I may have honest to God cried a few times. The way that Braden is dealing with his life and with his relationships with people - Shiloh, his brother, his uncle, Jase's friends - it's inspirational. I'm amazed at how well you've brought this all together. You're slowly but surely tying up the loose ends like a bow on the wonderful gift of a story this is. I'll be lost when this ends, but I'll be coming back to read it over and over again long after you post the final chapter.