for girls in leather jackets12/25/2014 c1 
26cassi crysta
Oh. My. God. This is so me. I lovelovelove the twisted dark imagery. Love!
26cassi crystaOh. My. God. This is so me. I lovelovelove the twisted dark imagery. Love!
12/23/2014 c1 16John-the-H-is-silent
Seductive in one of the darkest ways. An unadulterated view through the lens of someone who's been through some serious crap and a way they deal with it.. or how it deals with them. The tempo gets the blood racing. Dark, but poetic. I like it. And a perfect title.
16John-the-H-is-silentSeductive in one of the darkest ways. An unadulterated view through the lens of someone who's been through some serious crap and a way they deal with it.. or how it deals with them. The tempo gets the blood racing. Dark, but poetic. I like it. And a perfect title.
12/22/2014 c1 97rust phoenix
This is extremely vivid and powerful. You describe the self-destructive feeling well. The last five lines are especially strong.
97rust phoenixThis is extremely vivid and powerful. You describe the self-destructive feeling well. The last five lines are especially strong.