for Space Pirates1/10/2015 c35 Hakalau Tom
Whoa. The the last batch of chapters blasted most of the fog and confusion away, no doubt exposing a new layer of confusion.
Whoa. The the last batch of chapters blasted most of the fog and confusion away, no doubt exposing a new layer of confusion.
1/8/2015 c27 Hakalau Tom
At first, I thought you were forcing youself to cycle POV through the entire crew, but now it's bouncing around as needed. I think the fog and confusion between Guy and Bug is getting a little stale, but with updates so frequent, that will work itself out. I'm enjoying every chapter.
At first, I thought you were forcing youself to cycle POV through the entire crew, but now it's bouncing around as needed. I think the fog and confusion between Guy and Bug is getting a little stale, but with updates so frequent, that will work itself out. I'm enjoying every chapter.
1/6/2015 c9 Guest
Multiple povs not working for me. I've read stories with multiple povs (not 2 or 3) and they worked. May be because there was a bit more length between the switch in pov.
Multiple povs not working for me. I've read stories with multiple povs (not 2 or 3) and they worked. May be because there was a bit more length between the switch in pov.
1/6/2015 c23 Evangeline Curls
I didn't like the writing style at first...it felt weird to go back and forth between the characters. I have to say that I like the last few chapters that focus on just Bug and Guy. I also like AVI's chapters too. It has definitely grown on me. I look forward to reading more. I also like that even though the chapters jump back and forth, you don't repeat events in different perspectives. Some authors do that and just rehash the event but with different view points, that is definitely redundant and sometimes annoying. Anyway, update again soon :)
I didn't like the writing style at first...it felt weird to go back and forth between the characters. I have to say that I like the last few chapters that focus on just Bug and Guy. I also like AVI's chapters too. It has definitely grown on me. I look forward to reading more. I also like that even though the chapters jump back and forth, you don't repeat events in different perspectives. Some authors do that and just rehash the event but with different view points, that is definitely redundant and sometimes annoying. Anyway, update again soon :)