for What's The Worst That Could Happen?1/5/2022 c19 marrybeth
halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Marry an editor for a fast growing platform, may i know how to reach you professionally?
halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Marry an editor for a fast growing platform, may i know how to reach you professionally?
5/29/2019 c19 Guest
Loved this story so much! Please continue it huhu. I'd like to see what's next for Elsa and Darren. :)
Loved this story so much! Please continue it huhu. I'd like to see what's next for Elsa and Darren. :)
5/24/2019 c19 AngelRiku
This was really good! Please continue this story!
This was really good! Please continue this story!
10/21/2018 c19 yessss
awesome love that she didnt just accept it i hope you write a sequel for this one
awesome love that she didnt just accept it i hope you write a sequel for this one
8/22/2016 c10 
3ILoveToRead216
Okayyy, so, uhm, miss/sir writer, how many more chapters until you write something supernatural, because supernatural is one of the story tags, sooo... [no offense intended...]
3ILoveToRead216Okayyy, so, uhm, miss/sir writer, how many more chapters until you write something supernatural, because supernatural is one of the story tags, sooo... [no offense intended...]
8/21/2016 c10 Electra001
It' s good how you ended it there. Elsa's mother was encouraging and reassuring. So Elsa makes up her mind. Still, I ' m not sure this was the right move for Elsa. It' s not easy living with other people, let alone future in laws. She can still stay home and get married after a long engagement. No need to rush things.
On the other hand, living with the in laws will definitely give her a chance to get to know them better before the vig day.
It' s good how you ended it there. Elsa's mother was encouraging and reassuring. So Elsa makes up her mind. Still, I ' m not sure this was the right move for Elsa. It' s not easy living with other people, let alone future in laws. She can still stay home and get married after a long engagement. No need to rush things.
On the other hand, living with the in laws will definitely give her a chance to get to know them better before the vig day.
8/17/2016 c9 10Ardina Falconhurst
Another great chapter, the story is moving along nicely. The way you set up the beginning of this chapter was very well done, a lot of stories don't do time jumps of a few months very well, but you did. These characters are still believeable, she's happy but then starts thinking realistically and starts worrying. He's excited and wants her close to him asap. So the 2 sides are going to need a compromise or something. Can't wait to see how ithe works out.
10Ardina FalconhurstAnother great chapter, the story is moving along nicely. The way you set up the beginning of this chapter was very well done, a lot of stories don't do time jumps of a few months very well, but you did. These characters are still believeable, she's happy but then starts thinking realistically and starts worrying. He's excited and wants her close to him asap. So the 2 sides are going to need a compromise or something. Can't wait to see how ithe works out.
8/6/2016 c3 Electra001
Love these two, their banter and playfulness :)
Best line:
It was as if God had pulled out his pencil and sat down to write me a fairy tail. I was an avid fan of the novel so far.
Congrats on getting your degree
Love these two, their banter and playfulness :)
Best line:
It was as if God had pulled out his pencil and sat down to write me a fairy tail. I was an avid fan of the novel so far.
Congrats on getting your degree
8/6/2016 c1 Electra001
What a great story! It' s cute and funny
Love the title.
Favorite line: " As long as you're clothed, it' s fine..." And everything thereafter.
Actually, there are several great lines in this chapter alone!
What a great story! It' s cute and funny
Love the title.
Favorite line: " As long as you're clothed, it' s fine..." And everything thereafter.
Actually, there are several great lines in this chapter alone!
2/16/2016 c6 10Ardina Falconhurst
A long while back I'd read the first 2 chapters, but I'd been so busy moving abroad I hadn't caught up on many stories. So I just read all 6 chapters and I'm like whaaaaat? This is not the type of story I was expecting. Like...wolves? Werewolves...she was adopted so perhaps she's one too...but like how wouldn't she know...?
So many questions but I'm sure you'll get to them all in time. Meanwhile, I am enjoying this quite a bit. So thanks for the great read.
One point you may wanna clarify on...single mothers normally cannot adopt a child. So perhaps she was a family members child? Idk, that's the only thing that stood out to me and made me think about it more than I should.
Keep up the great work!
~Pepper
10Ardina FalconhurstA long while back I'd read the first 2 chapters, but I'd been so busy moving abroad I hadn't caught up on many stories. So I just read all 6 chapters and I'm like whaaaaat? This is not the type of story I was expecting. Like...wolves? Werewolves...she was adopted so perhaps she's one too...but like how wouldn't she know...?
So many questions but I'm sure you'll get to them all in time. Meanwhile, I am enjoying this quite a bit. So thanks for the great read.
One point you may wanna clarify on...single mothers normally cannot adopt a child. So perhaps she was a family members child? Idk, that's the only thing that stood out to me and made me think about it more than I should.
Keep up the great work!
~Pepper