for Mystical Elements7/20 c18 
38Starart152
The story turned into a bit of a sci-fi with our characters going to the world of Maylen. Glad they managed to patch things up and avoided Maylen to just distrust them after she was attacked by the girls.
38Starart152The story turned into a bit of a sci-fi with our characters going to the world of Maylen. Glad they managed to patch things up and avoided Maylen to just distrust them after she was attacked by the girls.
7/17 c17 Starart152
This is an intense chapter where the girls managed to infiltrate the place in an explosive manner.
Meanwhile Vivian managed to use her diplomacy skills to convince the alien to trust her, but her friends just rushed ahead and attacked Maylen when she was in the open.
This is an intense chapter where the girls managed to infiltrate the place in an explosive manner.
Meanwhile Vivian managed to use her diplomacy skills to convince the alien to trust her, but her friends just rushed ahead and attacked Maylen when she was in the open.
5/30/2021 c26 6Darth Zannacross
The girls seem to be making headway but Friss seems to welcome the threat as a chance to be more of a jerk...this can't end well.
Well best of luck writing the next part and till next time.
6Darth ZannacrossThe girls seem to be making headway but Friss seems to welcome the threat as a chance to be more of a jerk...this can't end well.
Well best of luck writing the next part and till next time.
5/28/2021 c25 Darth Zannacross
Well...things are escalating rather fast so time for some VERY aggressive negotiations.
Lets hope Samantha won't regret spilling the beans to General Ossern, guess only one way to find out.
Well...things are escalating rather fast so time for some VERY aggressive negotiations.
Lets hope Samantha won't regret spilling the beans to General Ossern, guess only one way to find out.
5/21/2021 c24 Darth Zannacross
We learn a few things about how warping seems to work here...good to know how to warp correctly before you land on the other side upside down...with your legs where your arms should be.
Well, things are not going according to plan so to speak...lets see how much of a pain this general makes things.
We learn a few things about how warping seems to work here...good to know how to warp correctly before you land on the other side upside down...with your legs where your arms should be.
Well, things are not going according to plan so to speak...lets see how much of a pain this general makes things.
5/20/2021 c23 Darth Zannacross
Well, things worked out for Milly better then it seemed, unless this is a trap.
We will see how being dumped with all these folks plus Lenay will mix things up and all.
Well, things worked out for Milly better then it seemed, unless this is a trap.
We will see how being dumped with all these folks plus Lenay will mix things up and all.
5/18/2021 c22 Darth Zannacross
It seems are Mermaid healer mostly is good with the job...just not good at repairing clothing for now. But we have bigger problems with just how hostile these lizard foes might be.
It seems are Mermaid healer mostly is good with the job...just not good at repairing clothing for now. But we have bigger problems with just how hostile these lizard foes might be.
5/16/2021 c21 Darth Zannacross
Well, we got ladies looking for things all over, learning a tad bit more on things like Lady D. Capiche...we will see how much a mermaid will mix things up I suppose.
Well, we got ladies looking for things all over, learning a tad bit more on things like Lady D. Capiche...we will see how much a mermaid will mix things up I suppose.
5/16/2021 c16 38Starart152
This is a nice chapter where we find out what happened to Vivian and who kidnapped her. Maylen is an alien, but she makes me think more of a Naga than an alien. Still, I wonder how Vivian will get out of her mess. Will she managed on her own or would her friends find her at the right time.
38Starart152This is a nice chapter where we find out what happened to Vivian and who kidnapped her. Maylen is an alien, but she makes me think more of a Naga than an alien. Still, I wonder how Vivian will get out of her mess. Will she managed on her own or would her friends find her at the right time.
5/15/2021 c20 6Darth Zannacross
Well, thanks to some cool tech Dayen's in the clear, and with this bonus scene we see just what kind of state Dayen is in...could be better could be worst I suppose.
6Darth ZannacrossWell, thanks to some cool tech Dayen's in the clear, and with this bonus scene we see just what kind of state Dayen is in...could be better could be worst I suppose.
5/15/2021 c15 38Starart152
This is a nice chapter that prepares for the big action. At least, the house is safe from the traps now. I do wonder what will come next for the characters and what is going on with Vivian.
38Starart152This is a nice chapter that prepares for the big action. At least, the house is safe from the traps now. I do wonder what will come next for the characters and what is going on with Vivian.
5/13/2021 c19 6Darth Zannacross
Well, the natives are friendly enough if they are willing to hand out spare clothing to hapless visitors it seems.
So now we are fighting a rebellion on a snake planet...this is quite a change in tone but we will see where it goes lol.
6Darth ZannacrossWell, the natives are friendly enough if they are willing to hand out spare clothing to hapless visitors it seems.
So now we are fighting a rebellion on a snake planet...this is quite a change in tone but we will see where it goes lol.
5/12/2021 c18 Darth Zannacross
Well, things got intense with Vivan but we see there is a much larger game being played here as we expand the stage to a galactic level it seems. Well, lets see how rough a ride Milly and co are going to go through.
Well, things got intense with Vivan but we see there is a much larger game being played here as we expand the stage to a galactic level it seems. Well, lets see how rough a ride Milly and co are going to go through.
5/11/2021 c17 Darth Zannacross
Time flies but lets get back to this with this venomous chapter.
Well...don't cross snakey foes unless you get some antidotes for poison, lets see how they can handle Maylen's fury.
Time flies but lets get back to this with this venomous chapter.
Well...don't cross snakey foes unless you get some antidotes for poison, lets see how they can handle Maylen's fury.
1/31/2021 c16 Darth Zannacross
Well...Vivian is clearly in a rather...risky situation right now. Maylen and Cobra Commander might have a few things in common but we will see how long this snake woman's plots last if her " weakness" is already found...we will see.
Well...Vivian is clearly in a rather...risky situation right now. Maylen and Cobra Commander might have a few things in common but we will see how long this snake woman's plots last if her " weakness" is already found...we will see.