for Grey Area2/23/2015 c3 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
Eliza and Jashym are really cute, and this whole chapter was very pleasing. I enjoyed this little read. Great job!
Eliza and Jashym are really cute, and this whole chapter was very pleasing. I enjoyed this little read. Great job!
2/16/2015 c3 SuddenlySunday
Aw, this is all there is? Can you write more? I'd love to see this story have more chapters! You deserve all of your reviews!
Aw, this is all there is? Can you write more? I'd love to see this story have more chapters! You deserve all of your reviews!
2/16/2015 c2 SuddenlySunday
So far, I really like this story. It'll be fun getting to know these characters. I like how you have things set up and everything.
So far, I really like this story. It'll be fun getting to know these characters. I like how you have things set up and everything.
2/16/2015 c1 SuddenlySunday
This is a good premise. I can't wait to see what you do with the rest. I'm going to read ahead and see what new chapters you have!
This is a good premise. I can't wait to see what you do with the rest. I'm going to read ahead and see what new chapters you have!
2/16/2015 c3 
1Dark Lord Cthulhu
So far, this is really, really good. I see that you wrote more chapters and I love were you're taking this. I hope you update soon.
1Dark Lord CthulhuSo far, this is really, really good. I see that you wrote more chapters and I love were you're taking this. I hope you update soon.
1/28/2015 c3 13Revamp
I loved this chapter. It had a nice amount of description, proper build-up and great characterization. I see that everyone is getting fleshed out well. The bed sharing scene made me giggle. I can't wait to read your next update!
13RevampI loved this chapter. It had a nice amount of description, proper build-up and great characterization. I see that everyone is getting fleshed out well. The bed sharing scene made me giggle. I can't wait to read your next update!
1/15/2015 c2 1Dark Lord Cthulhu
this is really interesting. i like the fact that they all have demon companions and stuff, then you can see the dynamics of the different relationships. this story is cool.
1Dark Lord Cthulhuthis is really interesting. i like the fact that they all have demon companions and stuff, then you can see the dynamics of the different relationships. this story is cool.
1/15/2015 c2 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
So far, you have a great story here. The only thing I would suggest is to give your characters a little more description but other than that, it's awesome and I can't wait to read more. Jashym and Aigos are my favorites so far.
So far, you have a great story here. The only thing I would suggest is to give your characters a little more description but other than that, it's awesome and I can't wait to read more. Jashym and Aigos are my favorites so far.
1/15/2015 c2 13Revamp
So far, this is really good, I look forward to seeing more from you. Your story has a lot of potential and I'm really interested in it.
13RevampSo far, this is really good, I look forward to seeing more from you. Your story has a lot of potential and I'm really interested in it.
1/14/2015 c1 Revamp
I really like how this started out. So far you have an interesting main character. I love how smartass she is. This story looks like it's going to be great!
I really like how this started out. So far you have an interesting main character. I love how smartass she is. This story looks like it's going to be great!